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Love’s Silhouette
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love defines us, frames us in its wake. (James T Griffin )
The shadow of your smile,
An outline of your breast
A sparkle in your eyes,
The way you tilt your head
How could I ever forget,
Loves silhouette
- Sweet reminders
Your perfume on my clothes
Tender dreams recalled,
Your arm in mine, hands tightly coiled
Your laughter echoing off the walls,
Tears tracking your cheeks
Framed perfectly, the sun about to set,
Loves silhouette
- Small treasures
Long strolls and endless talk,
Two shadows intersect
Me standing at the door,
You in that evening dress
So much more, but not just yet,
Loves silhouette
- Dreams realised
Your face in the moonlight
Body crease on the morning sheets,
Sharing coffee in bed
Watching favourite shows on the couch,
Your fingers in my hair
Feeling blessed that we even met,
Loves silhouette.
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spike
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Re: Love’s Silhouette
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:06:24 AM AEST
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this is very good.
like it . |
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Re: Love’s Silhouette
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:00:24 PM AEST
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What a tender sweet write, spike. So loving and beautiful.
I love the way you repeat the word's love's silhouette all
the way to the end where you've bolded it. Very effective.
The quote at the beginning is a wonderful addition too.
Thank you for sharing such a touching piece.
Le plus extraordinaire!
~Breezy |
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