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Sassy fallen angel
Risen from the depths of hell
You’re a demon of fire
Your weapon is Desire
Emanating from your cold, ice heart

Scented sickly sweet perfume
Cloistering within your tomb
With your black widow spider
Poison, seeping further inside her
Your bite delivered with a kiss

Cat lit in black
You’re on guard for attack
You’re a boa constrictor
You sure did trick her
With your serpentine, dangerous love

Cruel whispering lies
Sugar-coated candy sighs
You’re rotted to the core
You’re a seedy painted whore
Dressed in lace with your fancy face

Cloudy, hazy visionary
Lover, lover, quite contrary
You’re the master of the trance
To the slave of your own dance
You’re the deceiver of the truth

You’re the drug to the addiction
You’re not the cure, but the affliction
You’re a disease of the mind
Like a cancer you’re entwined
Sucking her dry like a leech

MW 19.09.05
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Fallen Angel

Contributed by evilfairy on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 11:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

* Fallen Angel *

Sassy fallen angel
Risen from the depths of hell
You’re a demon of fire
Your weapon is Desire
Emanating from your cold, ice heart

Scented sickly sweet perfume
Cloistering within your tomb
With your black widow spider
Poison, seeping further inside her
Your bite delivered with a kiss

Cat lit in black
You’re on guard for attack
You’re a boa constrictor
You sure did trick her
With your serpentine, dangerous love

Cruel whispering lies
Sugar-coated candy sighs
You’re rotted to the core
You’re a seedy painted whore
Dressed in lace with your fancy face

Cloudy, hazy visionary
Lover, lover, quite contrary
You’re the master of the trance
To the slave of your own dance
You’re the deceiver of the truth

You’re the drug to the addiction
You’re not the cure, but the affliction
You’re a disease of the mind
Like a cancer you’re entwined
Sucking her dry like a leech

MW 19.09.05

Copyright Â© evilfairy ... [ 2005-09-18 23:56:45]
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Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:04:27 PM AEST
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Nifty. I don't know why 103 people have failed to comment on this. The first two lines of this completely contradict, but it's one of those good 'ah ha' contradictions. As in, like how you did it on purpose. The usage of adj. and adv. is groovy. The line "You're a seedy painted whore" is amusing. The rhythm is catching, too. (^_^)b

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