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~*.::Beautiful Angel::.*~
Contributed by
rubytears
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:53:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Beautiful Angel
Way up above
Singing softly
His tale of love
He watches me sing
And shields me with wings
So my voice can carry on
He inspires and helps me write his song
About the boy
Who died so young
His dark wavy curls
Matted with blood
And scars from a father
Confused be love
Beautiful Angel
Who used to cry out
His emerald eyes
Waits in the clouds
Making sure I can't die
He protects me and others
Who are scared like he
And as I write he sings to me
Beautiful Angel who died
At nine
Couldnt be happier
Even if he was alive.
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rubytears
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Re: ~*.::Beautiful Angel::.*~
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:35:58 AM AEST
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| Very sad, I wish things like this were not a reality but they are and all we can do is take those things and move on . . . |
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Re: ~*.::Beautiful Angel::.*~
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by WAE on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:48:25 AM AEST
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Very touchy. First lines are so sweet:
"Beautiful Angel
Way up above
Singing softly
His tale of love"
and that lead me to a wrong assumption...
Nice writing...
Good luck!
Alex
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Re: ~*.::Beautiful Angel::.*~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:09:38 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. it gives you the feeling of someone watching over those who are hurt or feel the same as the angel.. also love the flow of this keep up the good work
JENNI |
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