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Array ( [sid] => 105801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Was The Sun [time] => 2005-09-16 05:23:06 [hometext] => Yay? :) [bodytext] => I can be your gift of illusion.
And I can be your fatal intrusion.

I could be your running start.
Then turn around and break your heart.

I could be your sea of sand.
And I could be your last demand.

I could be different.
I could be the one.

I could speak the softest words
Then point out the lies and curve.

I could be your sweetest dream.
then turn around and become a hated scheme.

I could be your secret desire.
In other words, I could let our love expire.

I can be your closest friend.
Then turn around and wake the end.

I am whatever you make me.

I could be different.
I should be different ..
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She Was The Sun

Contributed by Devotchkas on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:23:06 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I can be your gift of illusion.
And I can be your fatal intrusion.

I could be your running start.
Then turn around and break your heart.

I could be your sea of sand.
And I could be your last demand.

I could be different.
I could be the one.

I could speak the softest words
Then point out the lies and curve.

I could be your sweetest dream.
then turn around and become a hated scheme.

I could be your secret desire.
In other words, I could let our love expire.

I can be your closest friend.
Then turn around and wake the end.

I am whatever you make me.

I could be different.
I should be different ..

Copyright © Devotchkas ... [ 2005-09-16 05:23:06]
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Re: She Was The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:43:43 AM AEST
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Nice job... sounds like my husband... I really liked this, it was easy to read yet it had depth. I really liked : "I can be your gift of illusion.
And I can be your fatal intrusion.
" Good work keep it up. XOXOOX

Re: She Was The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST
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this is simple yet to the point.. good job i enjoyed this write..

JENNI

Re: She Was The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by LilyFire on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:22:04 PM AEST
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Sounds almost sad...like your pointing out all the things that could have been but somehow went wrong...Nice write though....

Re: She Was The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by SkC_cutie on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST
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I love the poem and the way that you write

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