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Thru The Minds Eye
Contributed by
HumGirl18
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes while sitting on the edge of time
I look faithfully down that deafening hall
With lights so bright the sun seems dull
Again focusing on the floor
I trust and lean back against an unstable door
While deep in my thoughts the world may fade
As I pick apart a heart well made
Itch the scratch and scrape the cut
Life has left nothing but...
Revolving floors and vanishing doors
That excite the body's mind and eye
Breaking waves against the glass
The sound of a tick, tick, ticking clock
Threes and twos
Three, two, one
one, one
one and...
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2003-01-17 09:40:00]
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Re: Thru The Minds Eye
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:13:56 AM AEST
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| I like this poem & the way you wrote was unique! Christina |
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Re: Thru The Minds Eye
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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| A very thought inspiring write! Well done :o) Larry |
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Re: Thru The Minds Eye
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by venkat on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:45:16 AM AEST
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| your write is nice but you are lost into deep sleep...when you will awake, of course you can see the bright sun. Thank you for sharing a good poem...venkat |
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Re: Thru The Minds Eye
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:56:34 AM AEST
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good imagery in this poem and loved the way it ended ..great write
peace be your journey
terry
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