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Array ( [sid] => 105764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be(lie)ve [time] => 2005-09-15 15:49:03 [hometext] => About a friend of mine who said [bodytext] => A young girl, so wise and beautiful as sin
But so tattered and torn below her skin
She vents anger but theres still so much in her underneath
She wants to believe, but she sees the lie in belief

To her love is another one of life's weaknesses
And she refuses to let herself feel weak with it
She's strong in the eyes of those who need to see
And haunting to those who betrayed her previously

"Can't break what's broken" is how she sees her heart
And the thorns of former 'lovers' have sliced her apart
Every smile she sees is a lie waiting to begin
Perhaps one day, in love, she'll believe again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 336 [topic] => 22 [informant] => heartquake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Be(lie)ve

Contributed by heartquake on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 03:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A young girl, so wise and beautiful as sin
But so tattered and torn below her skin
She vents anger but theres still so much in her underneath
She wants to believe, but she sees the lie in belief

To her love is another one of life's weaknesses
And she refuses to let herself feel weak with it
She's strong in the eyes of those who need to see
And haunting to those who betrayed her previously

"Can't break what's broken" is how she sees her heart
And the thorns of former 'lovers' have sliced her apart
Every smile she sees is a lie waiting to begin
Perhaps one day, in love, she'll believe again

Copyright © heartquake ... [ 2005-09-15 15:49:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Be(lie)ve (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:14:25 PM AEST
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Hello there,
I read your poem and I will remember:
"Can't break what's broken" is how she sees her heart..." I like that.
Good luck,
Alex

Re: Be(lie)ve (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:44:03 PM AEST
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Great write, the last stanza really spoke to me.

Sonya

Re: Be(lie)ve (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:30:25 PM AEST
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Wow. She sees the lie in belief....Never noticed that before. Hmmmmm

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