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Array ( [sid] => 105738 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That pain [time] => 2005-09-15 05:32:00 [hometext] => This is about a junkie who picks up lonely girls and uses them. Its based on a true story in which a girl commited suicide in my hometown. [bodytext] => That pain will never go away
You used the head without the brain
you knew that girl was insane
you knew all the things to say
she threw herself against a train
she'll never ever feel that pain again
You blew your chance to be a chain
to link that girl to the world again

Think back to all them rainy days
home alone getting out of your brain
who are you to deal out so much pain
and crawl back to your spoon again
boo hoo to you and your pain
numb it out and sleep out in the rain again
**** you I wish you father never came
I think it's time to stop the train again [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rickshaw [notes] => /// Follow the site rules or the entire poem will be deleted in future - Mod 8 /// [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

That pain

Contributed by Rickshaw on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

That pain will never go away
You used the head without the brain
you knew that girl was insane
you knew all the things to say
she threw herself against a train
she'll never ever feel that pain again
You blew your chance to be a chain
to link that girl to the world again

Think back to all them rainy days
home alone getting out of your brain
who are you to deal out so much pain
and crawl back to your spoon again
boo hoo to you and your pain
numb it out and sleep out in the rain again
**** you I wish you father never came
I think it's time to stop the train again

Copyright © Rickshaw ... [ 2005-09-15 05:32:00]
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Re: That pain (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:30:57 AM AEST
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Strong words and alot of pain and anger. If people would stop and think about what they do and say and how they live. But one can't judge another then they be judged. one sin is like another as well. if we only go back and change the things we done wrong. GREAT WRITE ..

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