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Array ( [sid] => 10566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Beautiful [time] => 2003-01-17 02:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this when my little brother was born ( august 9, 2002). [bodytext] => He is beautiful, so very beatiful
just like a winter's shining landscape,
as delicate as the petals of a daisy,
and as friendly as the eagle soaring against the blue.

His eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea
everything about him so very precious,
more precious than all the gems in the world,
his sole is the essence of the sky and earth,
his feelings are a volcano that is yet to explode,
his smile is the smile of lost innocence.

Pain vibrates deep inside of his gentle heart.
A lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of his mind,
a mind with as many roads as the worl has.
I look at him and I see a pure truth,
like looking at a clear night sky,
millions of star twinkle within him.

He is beauty as I defined it
he is perfect, his imperfections make him so.
He is my best friend, and I love him,
I love him although, not because.

And I would give up all the things which I think are pretty,
if only I can hold his beauty within me,
for he is everything in this world,
and I have found a world in him. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kolbrun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Beautiful

Contributed by kolbrun on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



He is beautiful, so very beatiful
just like a winter's shining landscape,
as delicate as the petals of a daisy,
and as friendly as the eagle soaring against the blue.

His eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea
everything about him so very precious,
more precious than all the gems in the world,
his sole is the essence of the sky and earth,
his feelings are a volcano that is yet to explode,
his smile is the smile of lost innocence.

Pain vibrates deep inside of his gentle heart.
A lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of his mind,
a mind with as many roads as the worl has.
I look at him and I see a pure truth,
like looking at a clear night sky,
millions of star twinkle within him.

He is beauty as I defined it
he is perfect, his imperfections make him so.
He is my best friend, and I love him,
I love him although, not because.

And I would give up all the things which I think are pretty,
if only I can hold his beauty within me,
for he is everything in this world,
and I have found a world in him.




Copyright © kolbrun ... [ 2003-01-17 02:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:21:05 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc..this is a beautiful poem .... I'm sure your baby brother will love it when he grows up...
Jenni


Re: Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:15:03 AM AEST
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Well done,it got a lot of feelings for your little brother.You love and admiration to him shows in your poem.I made a poem too similar like yours,dedicated to my stillborn son,born last year of September.


Re: Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by ke on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:33:34 AM AEST
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A beautiful and honest send off kolbrun - a lovely poem - GRHS
Regards
KE




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