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Array ( [sid] => 10552 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Beauty [time] => 2003-01-16 21:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Stunningly beautiful,
with her golden locks
of hair, swirling all
around her face.

An air of innocence,
she gave off-
purity and light
radiated from her soul.

That big, gorgeous smile
and teeth of pearl
brought happiness to all,
until the day
where this beauty died away.

They found her
in a pool of blood,
her wrists cut open,
the bath water
now turning cold.

Her once big, blue eyes,
were now drained of life
and tightly closed shut.

The beauty was dead,
the beauty was gone,
the beauty was bleeding,
the beauty...
was always dead inside.

Her life looked perfect,
and so complete,
but her world was awful,
boring,
and bleak.

The sadness lived inside her,
and grabbed her by the hand,
it slowly engulfed her
and deleted all the pain.

No more misery for her,
no more tears to cry,
the beauty was dead,
the beauty is gone... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Vampy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Beauty

Contributed by Vampy on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Stunningly beautiful,
with her golden locks
of hair, swirling all
around her face.

An air of innocence,
she gave off-
purity and light
radiated from her soul.

That big, gorgeous smile
and teeth of pearl
brought happiness to all,
until the day
where this beauty died away.

They found her
in a pool of blood,
her wrists cut open,
the bath water
now turning cold.

Her once big, blue eyes,
were now drained of life
and tightly closed shut.

The beauty was dead,
the beauty was gone,
the beauty was bleeding,
the beauty...
was always dead inside.

Her life looked perfect,
and so complete,
but her world was awful,
boring,
and bleak.

The sadness lived inside her,
and grabbed her by the hand,
it slowly engulfed her
and deleted all the pain.

No more misery for her,
no more tears to cry,
the beauty was dead,
the beauty is gone...

Copyright © Vampy ... [ 2003-01-16 21:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:27:01 PM AEST
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beauty never dies,,,friend in words spooky

Re: The Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 12:04:13 AM AEST
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Amanda... I loved this poem it took my breathe away... very well written very powerful very wow. This doesnt lack anything. Beautiful solid poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:00:07 AM AEST
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Ooo i love this....it's so full of darkness and pain.....Joel is right....this poem lacks nothing...it's completely beautiful....great write....keep em' coming....love it ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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