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Array ( [sid] => 105457 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation [time] => 2005-09-11 00:50:54 [hometext] => flowers and love and other charming things [bodytext] => You said you’d come tomorrow
I guess tomorrow never came
I sat for hours at the bus stop
For hours and they stretched like your smile on a rainy day
Oh but you have such a lovely smile

I sat here at first with anticipation
At end next to the tattered man without a place to call home
Who was by the way in quite a catchy state of hopelessness
But today you weren’t here to melt it all away

I was mumbling for a while
About flowers and love and other charming things
I was trying to remember why I was still there
And I was trying to convince my feet not to simply run away
Hopefully they’ll take root or at least rest for the time being

I never did see you that day
I’m sure that I’d recognize those bright blue eyes
Captivate by even the thought of your smile
And maybe I’ll be here again tomorrow
Sitting here reminds me that there are things worth waiting for. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 24 [informant] => rockergirl94 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation

Contributed by rockergirl94 on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:50:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



You said you’d come tomorrow
I guess tomorrow never came
I sat for hours at the bus stop
For hours and they stretched like your smile on a rainy day
Oh but you have such a lovely smile

I sat here at first with anticipation
At end next to the tattered man without a place to call home
Who was by the way in quite a catchy state of hopelessness
But today you weren’t here to melt it all away

I was mumbling for a while
About flowers and love and other charming things
I was trying to remember why I was still there
And I was trying to convince my feet not to simply run away
Hopefully they’ll take root or at least rest for the time being

I never did see you that day
I’m sure that I’d recognize those bright blue eyes
Captivate by even the thought of your smile
And maybe I’ll be here again tomorrow
Sitting here reminds me that there are things worth waiting for.




Copyright © rockergirl94 ... [ 2005-09-11 00:50:54]
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Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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I really like reading your poem....it was just so warm and sweet.

I so know what it's like to be in eager anticipation of seeing the one you love....and just thinking about it all day ahhh lol.

Lovely thoughts...
"And maybe I’ll be here again tomorrow
Sitting here reminds me that there are things worth waiting for."

...wonderful ending.

A real joy to read!
Great expression.


Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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I really love this. Reminds me of me in my youth. There is nothing at all wrong with flowers and love and dreams and beautiful blue eyes combined with a to die for smile. I love sweetness for that is so lacking in our lives. Don't lose it. Hang on tightly to it and keep believing, for in spite of heartache, it will be worth waiting for. Truly it will.

Rita


Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:32:47 AM AEST
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Loved the title and the last two lines, rest if it highly forgettable.


Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:41:33 AM AEST
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Loved it...all of it...you have wonderful talent...looking forward to seeing more of your writing

Umang




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