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Shining through the night in a smoldering flare
An image carried on the wind as a vision so swift
And upon your ivory skin, my dreams softly drift

An angel in hell or a devilish queen
Still against your heavenly body I lean
Flirting all night in this burning lair
My heart enflames from your golden stare

In the morning, light penetrated your skin under this silky white veil
Lying beside you, my eyes on your beauty set sail
Flames grew higher and began to sing
It sings of a dove with burning wings

As you woke from your slumber, our eyes met
Drowning in your sea of love, my heart melt
Then you spoke with words I could not hear
And your eyes sparkled shedding another tear

Just as I tried to kiss you, you faded away
In a weird light, like the moon beam
And the sun shown in my eyes in the early day
I opened them and realized it was all an ambiguous dream
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A Dove With Burning Wings

Contributed by Opium on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Your hair flew gently in the air
Shining through the night in a smoldering flare
An image carried on the wind as a vision so swift
And upon your ivory skin, my dreams softly drift

An angel in hell or a devilish queen
Still against your heavenly body I lean
Flirting all night in this burning lair
My heart enflames from your golden stare

In the morning, light penetrated your skin under this silky white veil
Lying beside you, my eyes on your beauty set sail
Flames grew higher and began to sing
It sings of a dove with burning wings

As you woke from your slumber, our eyes met
Drowning in your sea of love, my heart melt
Then you spoke with words I could not hear
And your eyes sparkled shedding another tear

Just as I tried to kiss you, you faded away
In a weird light, like the moon beam
And the sun shown in my eyes in the early day
I opened them and realized it was all an ambiguous dream




Copyright © Opium ... [ 2003-01-16 17:20:00]
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Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:06:53 PM AEST
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Wow. Opium... loved this dream.... A word of advice tho.... next time don't try to kiss her...lol.. THEN MAYBE SHE WONT FADE AWAY....
Jenni


Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 07:29:59 PM AEST
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Oh....*faints*...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:34:46 AM AEST
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should i be gina the mercyfull or gina the eye 4 eye ?
........and then i woke up, oh wat a dream ! lol
ba3den eza ma fi izmiz bel poem ma bte3jbak:@ pervert lol....
hehe kharjak , u couldnt take this kiss na na na na na lol
good write my friend
GENGEN


Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:02:59 AM AEST
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Oh YEAH....Great write Opium!! I really have a soft spot for dream poems and you have a masterpiece here! What vivid mental images.... Hats off ta ya pal :o) Larry


Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:26:58 PM AEST
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A beautiful and evocative dream Opium..

Thank you for your kind comments on my poems
Chrissie


Re: A Dove With Burning Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 03:28:43 AM AEST
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excellent.... a perfect poem.... hellofa ending..




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