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Array ( [sid] => 105375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Screw your comment [time] => 2005-09-09 12:54:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A heretic
Labeled a lunatic
Psychotic
Diagnosed deranged and neurotic
Compulsions
To satisfy obsessions
Relations
To sexualize my patience
Connections
Taste buds
Crave seconds
Desires of an adolescent
Malcontent
And well adjusted

A radical
Cynical and oppositional
Defiant
Perpetually reliant
Grammatical
Phonemes that cause excitement
Enticement
The lure of the scent
The core of relevance
Ashore breed the elements
Born is the fragrance
The aesthetics
So Screw your comments

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Screw your comment

Contributed by mangos on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 12:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A heretic
Labeled a lunatic
Psychotic
Diagnosed deranged and neurotic
Compulsions
To satisfy obsessions
Relations
To sexualize my patience
Connections
Taste buds
Crave seconds
Desires of an adolescent
Malcontent
And well adjusted

A radical
Cynical and oppositional
Defiant
Perpetually reliant
Grammatical
Phonemes that cause excitement
Enticement
The lure of the scent
The core of relevance
Ashore breed the elements
Born is the fragrance
The aesthetics
So Screw your comments

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Copyright © mangos ... [ 2005-09-09 12:54:05]
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Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 05:31:20 PM AEST
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Well, judging by the title, you don't care...
All I say is your poem is an abstract stream of your personal momentarious images that make sense to yourself.

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 08:04:10 PM AEST
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Agreed.......You can say stick your comments, yet you post. The write was, very abstract, but inner feelings. I like it. if ppl comment , they comment.who the hwck cares.! Thanks for posting

Brew~

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 10:56:54 PM AEST
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Hmmm an interesting topic if i say so myself.
you did good.

lol

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by tonydread on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 06:05:43 AM AEST
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low regard of mankind maliciousness an spiteful my first visit an i see smth like this

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by just-b on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:15:40 AM AEST
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A bit perplexing but , your inner thoughts may be a little sureal for some people but as long as you dig it .. it is not for anyone else to misconstrue..thanks for sharing

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:07:43 PM AEST
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Well now, this one certainly had an impact on the readers ; )

I can't remember the last time I saw so many votes! lol

I really like this write. It is a brutal, honest, and in the moment spill. It makes me think of one of two things...Either the first stanza is about one person, and the second about another...OR...The first and second are just a flipside of the same person. As for who this person(s) may be, the author, someone else, both, or just general observations...who knows, but you. You did what we all wish to do as writers---deliver a lasting reaction. Great job.

H.S.

Re: Screw your comment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:04:41 PM AEST
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this is poem that deserves a higher rating. just because a poem does not shoot you point blank in the face does not mean it isnt good. Well done.

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