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Array ( [sid] => 105337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye and Take Care [time] => 2005-09-08 22:04:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Goodbye and take care
This time we’re thru
Blame only yourself
For not bring true

You took me for granted
You took everything I had
Well I’m sick of it
I’m done being sad

You’re starting to fade
And I’m running our of tears
I’m focusing on my future
And overcoming my fears

You're nothing but a loser
And I’m glad that you are gone
You used me and abused me
You played me all along

You punished me for nothing
I hope your guilt eats you away
While I’m having your child
Unsure if things will be okay

But you, my dear
Will finally see
All the hurt and pain
That you caused me

I’m sorry it ended this way
This wasn’t suppose to be
The end of us-
The end of you and me

I loved you
With all of my heart
But you broke it in two
Now it’s time for us to part

This wasn’t easy for me
But no one said life would be fair
So good luck in the future
Goodbye and take care
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Goodbye and Take Care

Contributed by PrincessJen on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:04:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Goodbye and take care
This time we’re thru
Blame only yourself
For not bring true

You took me for granted
You took everything I had
Well I’m sick of it
I’m done being sad

You’re starting to fade
And I’m running our of tears
I’m focusing on my future
And overcoming my fears

You're nothing but a loser
And I’m glad that you are gone
You used me and abused me
You played me all along

You punished me for nothing
I hope your guilt eats you away
While I’m having your child
Unsure if things will be okay

But you, my dear
Will finally see
All the hurt and pain
That you caused me

I’m sorry it ended this way
This wasn’t suppose to be
The end of us-
The end of you and me

I loved you
With all of my heart
But you broke it in two
Now it’s time for us to part

This wasn’t easy for me
But no one said life would be fair
So good luck in the future
Goodbye and take care




Copyright © PrincessJen ... [ 2005-09-08 22:04:26]
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Re: Goodbye and Take Care (User Rating: 1 )
by Live4TheMoment on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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The flow of the poem was great. I hope things get better for you. Lots of luck.




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