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Array ( [sid] => 10532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the toy [time] => 2003-01-16 11:40:00 [hometext] => i think some pple can relate to this. BEING USED
thats what the poem is about [bodytext] => i was a toy before
nothing but plastic and elastic
to be pushed on the floor

now i see the truth
the lies in your eye's
the fakeness of your smile
there is no shame
to you i didn't even have a name
just a new toy

but the toy is broken
you have woken senses that shouldn't be
now i see your game

i'v been pushed too far
the toy is no more
i came alive
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 21 [informant] => idiotbox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
the toy

Contributed by idiotbox on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



i was a toy before
nothing but plastic and elastic
to be pushed on the floor

now i see the truth
the lies in your eye's
the fakeness of your smile
there is no shame
to you i didn't even have a name
just a new toy

but the toy is broken
you have woken senses that shouldn't be
now i see your game

i'v been pushed too far
the toy is no more
i came alive




Copyright © idiotbox ... [ 2003-01-16 11:40:00]
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Re: the toy (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 02:07:55 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...i am glad that you were able to "come alive" good job on this write and i wish you the best.


Re: the toy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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Lovely write...food for thought!!.. Good for you..
Jenni


Re: the toy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:07:39 PM AEST
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Being used...oh how those words ring bells in my ears....very painful indeed.....this has inspiration ....toy no more you came alive.....how lovely....keep writing i enjoyed this one....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: the toy (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:44:34 PM AEST
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My fav. :) Very symbolic . Love it! ~ FRU




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