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[aid] => mick
[title] => STILL IN SHOCK
[time] => 2005-09-08 05:46:06
[hometext] => Written 9/02/05 Aftermath of Katrina
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
OH FATHER,
For all generocity, we say,
God will bless you today.
We're blessed so much now.
We gotta help them somehow.
Humbly we bow
trying to understand how.
Still in shock for people's soul
Distruction every where they go.
Humbly we bow
Please get um all out.
Let them feel our aching luv
As u interceed with heavenly doves.
Our heart's we open wide.
Let your omnipitent luv abide.
We open our homes to relieve
As aching heart's luved ones grieve.
Let us sow your seeds of compassion
Share our hevenly rations.
Wrap them in your gracious touch
Show them we luv them much.
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[informant] => emystar
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[score] => 29
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AmericanTragedy
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STILL IN SHOCK
Contributed by
emystar
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:46:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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SultryRose's Signatures
OH FATHER,
For all generocity, we say,
God will bless you today.
We're blessed so much now.
We gotta help them somehow.
Humbly we bow
trying to understand how.
Still in shock for people's soul
Distruction every where they go.
Humbly we bow
Please get um all out.
Let them feel our aching luv
As u interceed with heavenly doves.
Our heart's we open wide.
Let your omnipitent luv abide.
We open our homes to relieve
As aching heart's luved ones grieve.
Let us sow your seeds of compassion
Share our hevenly rations.
Wrap them in your gracious touch
Show them we luv them much.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-09-08 05:46:06]
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:12:33 AM AEST
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Emy this is a beautiful tribute to this sad natural disaster that's happened. My prayers go out to all the victims of this disaster. May God be with them always.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:59:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful write for those devastated souls affected by this tragedy...
Now's the time to ban together as one. |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:01:56 AM AEST
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A really touching prayer for the victims of Katrina...I am still trying to imagine their lives now....
Hugs an Luv...
Jenni |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:19:21 AM AEST
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| Beautifully Written. They need all the help that we can give, one and all. |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:46:27 AM AEST
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So heart-warming a poem this is Emystar.
Your love and emphathy with the suffering shines in every line.
I wrote too something, and posted it with the short stories, but mine is real "Grim"
Oh very "Grim" to read.
.http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Mem_Stories&file=article&sid=199
Thank you for your beautiful poem. A repose for the soul.
Elizabeth |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM AEST
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what a wonderful tribute to the people .
awsome job. |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Archie on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:45:27 PM AEST
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| I like your heart in this poem. Thanks for helping and not complaining. |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 09:37:44 AM AEST
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I totally understand what you meant Emy. I am still in shick with all that's happening out there. I wish i could help out and put them all in new houses so that people wont rape them or kill them.
It's just a sad sad thing to happen to them. Nicely written poem Emy.
Hugs,
Jane~ |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:11:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Emmy. May god help them all.
In my prayers
Amen
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Willofree on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:52:38 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem/prayer on behalf of those who are suffering in the aftermath of that terrible storm. A heartfelt show of love and caring.
A wonderful tribute to those who are suffering, and a show of support. Thanks for sharing this emy.
Will |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:10:52 PM AEST
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A lovely write that shows you care.
Sometimes mother nature can be so cruel, but if we all stick together in times of crisis we can still prevail
Steve |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Darkhorse71 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:30:02 PM AEST
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Emy, a beautiful, heartfelt, much needed poem. I live in central Florida and we still have a lot of houses with tarps instead of roofs after last year, and one neighborhood that's still flooded. We received so much love, help, and prayers from all over the country that helped us push on and we'll never forget. My heart goes out to all those affected and to the disruption of their lives.
This was a beautiful tribute, thanks for writing it.
peace and hugs my friend, john |
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Re: STILL IN SHOCK
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:38:08 AM AEST
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| When ever I read your poetry i am often surprisedat how much you pray for people in your poetry. That is always a positive influence on me. |
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