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Array ( [sid] => 105236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let me take you there. [time] => 2005-09-07 14:48:57 [hometext] => With you I am sure it would be even more interesting. [bodytext] => All the places, that I've seen,
looking at all those beautiful things.
I wonder,if've I missed anything?

I look back over my shoulder,
there, around the last corner
I see, a lovely flower.

I can, take a few steps back
go, enjoy and not miss that
and, I wonder, whats ahead?

I am glad that I came this way
with all its mischiefs and sways
lovely things that I've seen said, stay.

Up ahead I see lovelier grounds
Come now hold my hand
for I'd want to take you there. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 21 [informant] => remote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Let me take you there.

Contributed by remote on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

All the places, that I've seen,
looking at all those beautiful things.
I wonder,if've I missed anything?

I look back over my shoulder,
there, around the last corner
I see, a lovely flower.

I can, take a few steps back
go, enjoy and not miss that
and, I wonder, whats ahead?

I am glad that I came this way
with all its mischiefs and sways
lovely things that I've seen said, stay.

Up ahead I see lovelier grounds
Come now hold my hand
for I'd want to take you there.

Copyright © remote ... [ 2005-09-07 14:48:57]
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Re: Let me take you there. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wendy on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:51:24 PM AEST
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I really like what this says. It describes my philosophy of life, always wanting and looking forward to what's ahead and afraid to miss anything. I don't mind backtracking a little from time to time because you never know what you will find.

Re: Let me take you there. (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:50:47 PM AEST
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This is a poem with a lovely message about life thus far, and what may be in the near and more distant future. Very nice indeed

Colin

Re: Let me take you there. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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Nice little light-hearted write...Life is full of many wonders for sure! Don't forget to stop and smell those roses once in awhile : )

Scorp.

Re: Let me take you there. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 11:54:57 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing with the reader. I think your words take the reader on a journey into your life.

Re: Let me take you there. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:45:24 PM AEST
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Thank you for taking us there. It was a VERY enjoyable trip. Really love this one. Thank you.

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