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Array ( [sid] => 105130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Logical Madness [time] => 2005-09-05 22:25:04 [hometext] => just some misc. madness i through together. does it make no sence? I don't know these are just some silly thaughts that came to me [bodytext] =>
what is it about these ones, we call crazy

scared of the three others they talk to

or are the doctors just plain lazy


just who gets to decide whats right and sane

who hasn't let loose with thier feelings

who hasn't consulted with the other side of the brain


heres something to loosen your head, and to stir the noodle

just who should be labled, the 3 year old child

or the first person to shave, a pure bred poodle


now that your thinking in a crazy sence

we can walk down the less travled path

were there are no boundries, there is no fence


I know what your thinking, you've herd this befor

one pluss three..... should, no .....must equal four


see your doing it now, with out even knowing

are you going to introduce me to your friend

or are they just saying hi and already going


the mind is such.. such a beautiful place

were nothing matters not even a taste

of the short legged tortous who finished the race

or the white coated doctor who covered your case


its a puzzle thats not ment to be finished

not cheated drugged deprived diminished


its a place for fun giggling and laughter

the place to go, befor and certainly not after



















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Logical Madness

Contributed by MadCackle on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract




what is it about these ones, we call crazy

scared of the three others they talk to

or are the doctors just plain lazy


just who gets to decide whats right and sane

who hasn't let loose with thier feelings

who hasn't consulted with the other side of the brain


heres something to loosen your head, and to stir the noodle

just who should be labled, the 3 year old child

or the first person to shave, a pure bred poodle


now that your thinking in a crazy sence

we can walk down the less travled path

were there are no boundries, there is no fence


I know what your thinking, you've herd this befor

one pluss three..... should, no .....must equal four


see your doing it now, with out even knowing

are you going to introduce me to your friend

or are they just saying hi and already going


the mind is such.. such a beautiful place

were nothing matters not even a taste

of the short legged tortous who finished the race

or the white coated doctor who covered your case


its a puzzle thats not ment to be finished

not cheated drugged deprived diminished


its a place for fun giggling and laughter

the place to go, befor and certainly not after























Copyright © MadCackle ... [ 2005-09-05 22:25:04]
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Re: Logical Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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Oh my you had me rolling with laughter here..

LOL.. And yes, of course I counted lol.

****the mind is such.. such a beautiful place

were nothing matters not even a taste

of the short legged tortous who finished the race

or the white coated doctor who covered your case

LOL


****its a place for fun giggling and laughter

the place to go, befor and certainly not after


Yes, I should like to visit my mind more often to find the funny stuff.

Oh my, keep writing, your a hoot : ))

Really loosened me up lol.

not that way , lol..

Raquel Leah


Re: Logical Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:23:35 PM AEST
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ooo I like it!!!!!

You've composed this poem of subtle insanity very well.....and sometimes the silly thoughts transform into a brilliant poem....like yours today.

Well done, great job.


Re: Logical Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Doubtless_One on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 12:05:17 AM AEST
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That was great really just a fun read
great write


Re: Logical Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:31:44 AM AEST
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I do like this. A good bit of rambling insanity, of the finest grade. There is quite a bit of spelling imperfections, but other than that, this is a fine, thought-provoking piece.

Nicely done.

Andrew


Re: Logical Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by NoangelNohope on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:09:01 PM AEST
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wow!! you reallly got me thinking there!! and thinking that maybe if ppl would through the labels "crazy, insane" and ***** like that around, then MAYBE we could ACTUALLY begin to learn more about our own brains, and become SMARTER and MORE sane...well sane in the term of docters.....though i like being a bit crazy you know? lol ;) =)




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