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lost shadow
Contributed by
cutestmofo
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 12:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Lost shadow
It use to follow me wherever I go
Now it is here no more
It use to mock my every move
Like it had something to prove
But its here no more
Where is my shadow I loved before
It use to play a dog or a dove to lift my mood
Always my friend when I wasnt feeling good
A dark figure but a friend more or less
Always there for me he was truly the best
He was either in front of me to guide the way
Or behind me cause he was afraid
But no matter what he was my friend
With a little bit of light he would stand to the end
Now his gone I weep with sorrow
Goodbye shadow see you tomorrow
By Kerwin Etienne
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2005-09-05 00:17:34]
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Re: lost shadow
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by Pisces101 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 12:50:29 AM AEST
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Nice write. know exactly what you mean. feel that way everyday. break things down. find out whats making you feel that way...
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Re: lost shadow
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by bluebird on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:28:03 AM AEST
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I loved this piece. very deep and meaningful, said everythign that everyone,well almost everyone feels at some point in their lifetime. very well done.
can relate to how you feel
keep the faith
~bec~ |
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