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I read what it said
Now I wish I really was dead
You said you wish I wasnt your friend
I'll slit my wrist,my life will come to an end
Well I might bleed to death
Now I will say " i love you" with my very last breath
Remember me as the friend who died
Because she thought she had a friend,that lied
How could you say that about me?
Didnt you know I would see?
These words really hurt
They made me feel worse then dirt
Lower then low
But now I know
How much you talk about me
No I dont feel special
Im dirt
That hundreds of people walked on
Spit on,steped on
Im dirt

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Im Dirt

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I read your poem
I read what it said
Now I wish I really was dead
You said you wish I wasnt your friend
I'll slit my wrist,my life will come to an end
Well I might bleed to death
Now I will say " i love you" with my very last breath
Remember me as the friend who died
Because she thought she had a friend,that lied
How could you say that about me?
Didnt you know I would see?
These words really hurt
They made me feel worse then dirt
Lower then low
But now I know
How much you talk about me
No I dont feel special
Im dirt
That hundreds of people walked on
Spit on,steped on
Im dirt

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-09-03 03:06:53]
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Re: Im Dirt (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:49:46 AM AEST
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This is such a sad poem. I'm sorry your friendship ended like this and you had to see the poem.

Hugs,
Jane~

Re: Im Dirt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:16:29 PM AEST
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Such a tragic end to a friendship as if love isn't hard enough to hold on to well i'm sorry
for your pain but as for you being dirt not realy
friendship like love is 2 ways and lately people have 4goten how 2 count pass 1 . . .

((((((((4u))))))))

Ben

Re: Im Dirt (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:02:26 AM AEST
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h-h-hey people, our friendship didnt end!!! even though it feels like we are not as close anymore, well to me at least. I miss you so much Denise! And I love you so much! I don't ever want to lose you as a friend. Like one of those poems that you or I have wrote lol i forgot we are so different but yet we are the same. Something like that. I never met a friend like you before, we have different backgrounds and everything but something about u that i like so much as a friend nice poem though although i cried while reading it i love u

*hugs and kisses*

Kimmy

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