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Its done more then just a few
Hes says his life is *****
He says he just cant take it
Gonna slash his wrist
So he makes a fist
Heavily sighs
Too bad no one hears all his cries
His anguish,His rage
He said it was like being locked up in a cage
I sat with him and hugged him
He looks so sad and dim
His parens are screwed and foster care wants him
He said the people that cared are spliting
All my so called friends make fun of me
No one sees my hurt...my feelings
I hate my life is what he said
But soon I will be dead
He said who will care
No one is ever there
All this is his fate
Too bad hes only eight. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 61 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Fate

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

This is not something new
Its done more then just a few
Hes says his life is *****
He says he just cant take it
Gonna slash his wrist
So he makes a fist
Heavily sighs
Too bad no one hears all his cries
His anguish,His rage
He said it was like being locked up in a cage
I sat with him and hugged him
He looks so sad and dim
His parens are screwed and foster care wants him
He said the people that cared are spliting
All my so called friends make fun of me
No one sees my hurt...my feelings
I hate my life is what he said
But soon I will be dead
He said who will care
No one is ever there
All this is his fate
Too bad hes only eight.

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-08-31 21:51:16]
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Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:19:04 PM AEST
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Sad poem my friend

Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:33:54 PM AEST
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Too many who are that way and YES ITS SAD>! I cant stand the way kids are treated........they are the ones who cant always fend, nor find for them selves.! Sad write.Least you helped.which many WON"T

Brew~

Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 10:00:13 PM AEST
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this is beautifully written.
It is so sad that it is true and is happening everyday infront of so many blind people.

~bec~

Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 12:52:37 AM AEST
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This is very tragic a devistaing write filled with

so many conflicting emotion . . .

sorry 4 your pain hugs 2u

Ben

Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 06:55:10 PM AEST
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if only people would open their eyes and see what resides all around them! this world which so many think perfect and strong is a fragile thing, fragile because without life there is nothing and no one to hear a poor little boy's screams of pain and destruction! yet even with the many who reside on this earth, no one truly sees until forced, and then only think it was a nightmare.

Exquisite writing which is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.

~Ash

Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:33:18 AM AEST
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this is so sad and he is so young! Blessings to you and him

love ya

Kimmy

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