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Array ( [sid] => 104774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost in him [time] => 2005-08-31 14:23:20 [hometext] => Hey everyone. Sorry i've been gone for so long. Here is my latest. Comments welcome. Enjoy! [bodytext] => To love one is a given
But to love two should be a sin

I love my man beyond words
But a lost love boils deep within

There is no love like the first
Long after he is gone you crave for him
Like a hunger or an unbarable thirst

No matter what you do he stays on your mind
Torn between two men
It is so unfair
I never knew love could be so unkind

Some nights i lie awake thinking of him
Wondering what it would be like if we were still a couple

We would most likely scream and fight
Just like we always did
Nothing ever turned out right

We'd fight about my dad
Or his borthers
Sometimes my sisters
God i miss what we had

Okay so maybe we weren't perfect
But i don't know anybody that is

Besides it's just memories
Let me remember them
We'll never be together again
But i'll always be lost in him [comments] => 4 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 24 [informant] => SimplyAlucia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Lost in him

Contributed by SimplyAlucia on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 02:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



To love one is a given
But to love two should be a sin

I love my man beyond words
But a lost love boils deep within

There is no love like the first
Long after he is gone you crave for him
Like a hunger or an unbarable thirst

No matter what you do he stays on your mind
Torn between two men
It is so unfair
I never knew love could be so unkind

Some nights i lie awake thinking of him
Wondering what it would be like if we were still a couple

We would most likely scream and fight
Just like we always did
Nothing ever turned out right

We'd fight about my dad
Or his borthers
Sometimes my sisters
God i miss what we had

Okay so maybe we weren't perfect
But i don't know anybody that is

Besides it's just memories
Let me remember them
We'll never be together again
But i'll always be lost in him




Copyright © SimplyAlucia ... [ 2005-08-31 14:23:20]
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Re: Lost in him (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 02:42:06 PM AEST
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wow that was great, have missed your writes

pix xx


Re: Lost in him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:00:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always welcome back . . .

Ben


Re: Lost in him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 10:33:15 PM AEST
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  • Wow, this was pretty amazing work.

    I found this line:
    "But I'll always be lost in him",
    to be quite a powerful one..

    Memories are too dear to be left behind.


    ~KayT (and yes, welcome back indeed!)





  • Re: Lost in him (User Rating: 1 )
    by fancydreamer78 on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:10:14 AM AEST
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    i will always be lost in him...so this poem touches my heart deeply




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