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Array ( [sid] => 104760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A perfect Dance [time] => 2005-08-31 11:19:16 [hometext] => simple write, of two who have what all others want...........just pure , simple love. [bodytext] => Here we are;
The two walk in hand in hand,
They enter the ball room
The music of Strauss fills the air
Many there, but all eyes on a certain two
He looks at her with big brown eyes
She looks back with green emeralds
As she knows they will dance with no cares
He bows..........she curtsies.........now they begin to waltz
The free flowing of the two makes all step back
All eyes on the two.................Two that are in such love
They see ONLY them self........no others, and they waltz and waltz
The music comes to an end.............they bow, and never stop smiling [comments] => 7 [counter] => 316 [topic] => 2 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A perfect Dance

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:19:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Here we are;
The two walk in hand in hand,
They enter the ball room
The music of Strauss fills the air
Many there, but all eyes on a certain two
He looks at her with big brown eyes
She looks back with green emeralds
As she knows they will dance with no cares
He bows..........she curtsies.........now they begin to waltz
The free flowing of the two makes all step back
All eyes on the two.................Two that are in such love
They see ONLY them self........no others, and they waltz and waltz
The music comes to an end.............they bow, and never stop smiling

Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-08-31 11:19:16]
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Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:32:23 PM AEST
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Such a touching poem of love how they do not see anyone else but themselve is for sure love. YOu have displayed this excellently loved the bow and dancing in this genious
Cathy

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 02:56:36 PM AEST
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Lovely picture you have painted, Brew..I could almost hear the music as I see them dancing....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:29:03 PM AEST
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they bow and never stop smiling, love that line brew, beautiful work of art you have here
a true romantic delight, and strauss no less
to hell with redundantcy, quite a beautiful work of art you have here . . . **********

Ben

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:37:21 PM AEST
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Excellent poem, a writer that can make their readers picture what they were trying to describe is a beautiful piece of work, and you have done just that, very very good

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 12:16:17 AM AEST
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lovely write, care to dance lol

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:26:09 PM AEST
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Wow Dayna-

I absolutely love it-
..a moment in time..as it were-
caught and manifested into one of the
most beautiful things Ive read here yet!

It's beautiful-

Yours-

B

Re: A perfect Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Writting_Fever on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 05:53:37 PM AEST
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Very good write. I feel as though I am watching them dance in that room. Great Write

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