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[sid] => 104436
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Dad Save me
[time] => 2005-08-26 15:00:23
[hometext] => Just something simple i was working on today. There is an analogy going on in this song that the reader should see easily.
[bodytext] => I think this would make a good children's song. Some of the words would be too hard for young children, but their parents could read it to them telling them what those words meant. For me If I was a father i would sing this song to my child. Crying molting I am a bird Sobbing sinking within the mud Covered with the dirt of the world Caught in a terrible trap But then a hand comes down unto me It cleans off the mud that was on my my wings He dusts off the dirt that was on my head and untangles me from the trap Flying soaring up in the sky Singing shouting as life goes by Until I crash in the trap again and father bird comes down to save me I cry save me Dad save me I'm sinking in mud and I can not escape Dad save me Dad save me He picks me up gently in hand I chose a father bird for a very specific reason which I will not say. Knowing my writing the reader should be able to figure this out. There are 2 other songs I have written that fall in the children's song catagory "Look out your window" and "Lullabuy" [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
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