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the palladin's creed
Contributed by
Doubtless_One
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:28:14 PM in AEST
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know that if should die today know i died for you
my people
know that if i live to day i lived only by your grace
my god
if i should stray from the path call me back to you
my love
i am a protector
i am a devout
and i am a lover
for i am a palladin
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2005-08-23 21:28:14]
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Re: the palladin's creed
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:18:59 AM AEST
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I like this one much more than your other poem.
This one seems to have more depth, and more of a poetic sense, where as the other one states bluntly (and semi blandly) what exactly happened. I sort of stay clear from that type of stuff.
So, anyhow, good write. Keep it up.
-Jesi |
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