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To add, subtract and divide,
It was you who told me those funny things,
The key to living life.
And it was you who kept me going,
Through those complicated times,
And even though your gone now,
Onward your heart shines.
On Earth there aren’t many people,
Who are like you were, quite true,
So when my days are finally over,
I’ll look forward to being with you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 21 [informant] => xForgottonscentx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

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Contributed by xForgottonscentx on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It was you who taught me to read and write,
To add, subtract and divide,
It was you who told me those funny things,
The key to living life.
And it was you who kept me going,
Through those complicated times,
And even though your gone now,
Onward your heart shines.
On Earth there aren’t many people,
Who are like you were, quite true,
So when my days are finally over,
I’ll look forward to being with you.

Copyright Â© xForgottonscentx ... [ 2005-08-23 15:03:38]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:49:27 PM AEST
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aawww this is such a sweet poem! i really enjoyed readin this poem! i really felt the feelings going into this poem well done, and i also think this is you best one! its really good well done
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
xxx

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:29:36 PM AEST
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This is very sweet actually. I feel this way too.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by xForgottonscentx on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:33:27 AM AEST
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Thanx peeps, I've always thought this my best too!

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:36:44 AM AEST
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This is perfect. There are loved ones I think about and when I read this I am reminded of those that I wish to see again. Awesome poem.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:34:35 AM AEST
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Hi Forgottenscent, this is lovely indeed, he or she must have been very special to you.

Colin

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