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Array ( [sid] => 104206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dont make me the one [time] => 2005-08-23 00:47:53 [hometext] => i dont wanaa be the one to break your heart, so please dont let yourself fall for me............. [bodytext] => i dont want to be the one that hurts you
i couldn't stand the pain
You are always there for me when I need
Someone to pick me up when I am down.
Forcing me to smile when I want to frown.
but dont ask to be with me forever, I plead,
id fight your darkest fears in my dreams
if only the morning hour
would be brighter for you
as you do for me
bringing light to my dark, day to my night.
You are always there when I need a hand
You give your all, and you are always right.
And when all's said I hope you understand
dont ask me to love you
your heart is not mine to break

*authors note*
~it's kinda ironic that i haven't been able to find love, but when it comes knocking at my door i wanna scare it away cuz im afraid ill ruin it~ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 503 [topic] => 2 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Dont make me the one

Contributed by socialmisfit on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:47:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i dont want to be the one that hurts you
i couldn't stand the pain
You are always there for me when I need
Someone to pick me up when I am down.
Forcing me to smile when I want to frown.
but dont ask to be with me forever, I plead,
id fight your darkest fears in my dreams
if only the morning hour
would be brighter for you
as you do for me
bringing light to my dark, day to my night.
You are always there when I need a hand
You give your all, and you are always right.
And when all's said I hope you understand
dont ask me to love you
your heart is not mine to break

*authors note*
~it's kinda ironic that i haven't been able to find love, but when it comes knocking at my door i wanna scare it away cuz im afraid ill ruin it~

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-08-23 00:47:53]
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Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by Flyinglow on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:39:00 AM AEST
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Wow, its like the other story to so many of my relationship, great write, alot of memorable lines

Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:39:39 AM AEST
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This is such a heartfelt poem....

And when all's said I hope you understand
dont ask me to love you
your heart is not mine to break

Is my favorite part...i hope you let yourself love and be loved.

Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:55:40 AM AEST
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An interesting poem. Sometimes it is best not to get into a relationship. SLipSiX.

Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:39:14 AM AEST
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Wow...this is an amazing write.... you have captured your emotions so well here. Best of luck..
Jenni

Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:49:49 PM AEST
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Awww this is an emotionally well expressed write, but you shouldn't chase love away! Chase after it instead : )

Scorp.

Re: Dont make me the one (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:01:45 PM AEST
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this poem is really good.. it has a lot of emotion and is written very well! keep up the good work... and best of luck!

Sidney

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