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Array ( [sid] => 103887 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self Conscience [time] => 2005-08-19 00:07:24 [hometext] => this is a song that i just rote.... and its just what i feel every day..... [bodytext] => I feel like I’m a shadow,
Always there, but never noticed
Always getting stepped on,
Like I’m not supposed to be there
And not to be bothered with

I feel like I’m nothing,
Not even dirt
People walk through me,
And not around me
Like I’m not even there

I was so close only to find
Out that I was never free,
They locked everything
And threw away the key

I feel like I’m a mute,
When I talk, people tend
Not to listen or even care
The only one who can hear me
Is my messed up half,
The “other” me that people
Can’t see with the naked eye

I feel like I was brought into this
World to be neglected,
To be Emotionally Neglected by
The people who surround me within
The walls of my non-existent freedom

I was so close only to find
Out that I was never free,
They locked everything
And threw away the key [comments] => 2 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 34 [informant] => twitch06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Self Conscience

Contributed by twitch06 on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:07:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I feel like I’m a shadow,
Always there, but never noticed
Always getting stepped on,
Like I’m not supposed to be there
And not to be bothered with

I feel like I’m nothing,
Not even dirt
People walk through me,
And not around me
Like I’m not even there

I was so close only to find
Out that I was never free,
They locked everything
And threw away the key

I feel like I’m a mute,
When I talk, people tend
Not to listen or even care
The only one who can hear me
Is my messed up half,
The “other” me that people
Can’t see with the naked eye

I feel like I was brought into this
World to be neglected,
To be Emotionally Neglected by
The people who surround me within
The walls of my non-existent freedom

I was so close only to find
Out that I was never free,
They locked everything
And threw away the key

Copyright Â© twitch06 ... [ 2005-08-19 00:07:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self Conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:28:02 AM AEST
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you are not the only one that feels like this
i was born feeling this way
i tell ppl i know i am not meant for this world
but i am stuck here

i sometimes tell them hopefully not for long

then i go and cut away

Re: Self Conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:40:15 AM AEST
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I am sure everyone has felt like this before, I to have had moments such as this, I hated it but I just hung in there, loved more often and decided that those people were not going to get me down. HugGLes. SLipSiX.

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