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Array ( [sid] => 103512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Run Away [time] => 2005-08-14 22:29:49 [hometext] => they say not to run from your fears but what if thats all there is left to do? [bodytext] => she ran so far
as fast as she could
to get away from the world
that had cast her away
for all of her innocent mistakes
cruel faces starring at her
judging her every move
trying to escape her past
and all the pain
she ran so far
as fast as she could
she now lies awake
planning her next steps
everybody makes mistakes
why couldnt they forgive and forget hers
she pays for them with her life now
the mistakes from an awful past consume
everything she has left
she uses to make it through
maybe tomorrow will be different
and her peirs will accept her
for now she cries herself to sleep
until day break unfolds something new
something better than what she has now
hopefully.... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 61 [informant] => daydreamer22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Little Run Away

Contributed by daydreamer22 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:29:49 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



she ran so far
as fast as she could
to get away from the world
that had cast her away
for all of her innocent mistakes
cruel faces starring at her
judging her every move
trying to escape her past
and all the pain
she ran so far
as fast as she could
she now lies awake
planning her next steps
everybody makes mistakes
why couldnt they forgive and forget hers
she pays for them with her life now
the mistakes from an awful past consume
everything she has left
she uses to make it through
maybe tomorrow will be different
and her peirs will accept her
for now she cries herself to sleep
until day break unfolds something new
something better than what she has now
hopefully....




Copyright © daydreamer22 ... [ 2005-08-14 22:29:49]
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Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:36:20 PM AEST
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This is very good. I know that self struggle all too well as I'm sure many people here do. You described it perfectly. Nice job!

Take care,
Liz


Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:41:55 PM AEST
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love it.. was like you wrote about me.. Felt it in every way.. ty 4 sharin that..
Keep writing..Huggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:42:12 PM AEST
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Very nice poem.
I hope "she" gets to triumph over her trials.

Keep writing!

-Butch


Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:59:31 PM AEST
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this was greeeeeeeeeeat!


Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:28:27 PM AEST
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Great writing, Daydreamer. If she's strong enough to write down and face her fears, then she's strong enough to conquer them.
Thanks for sharing.

john


Re: Little Run Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:05:54 AM AEST
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Good poem, good write, I liked it, I understand where this poem is going, it is very hard for people to forget now a days. SLipSiX.




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