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Array ( [sid] => 103377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies [time] => 2005-08-13 01:38:27 [hometext] => Our relationship ended after i wrote this poem and shared it with LDP. Sometimes we all wish we could rewind time but we realize its too late. [bodytext] => I believed you,
But I never trusted you,
You said you liked me
You also say you wanted me,
I said NO!
I said it could never work.

I decided to give it a try,
I asked you to give us a chance,
I was messing to see the real you,
If you was being true to me,
U proved otherwise,
Dang, u said No!
I don’t understand you,
I believe now your words were all lies,
You were playing my mind.

You say wait a year,
That was my damn idea,
You wanted me to believe you liked me,
I swear I regret July 23rd,
I was on a break down,
I should have sealed my lip shut,
I shut my body out of me.

Wait for an outcome of a year?
Then when a year comes, you will play me again,
I won’t let that happen,
I am moving on,
Too late for you,
Cuz you will never get this chance again,
When you want me,
I will say No,
Cuz you lost your chance,
I found someone.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ruthie1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Lies

Contributed by ruthie1983 on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I believed you,
But I never trusted you,
You said you liked me
You also say you wanted me,
I said NO!
I said it could never work.

I decided to give it a try,
I asked you to give us a chance,
I was messing to see the real you,
If you was being true to me,
U proved otherwise,
Dang, u said No!
I don’t understand you,
I believe now your words were all lies,
You were playing my mind.

You say wait a year,
That was my damn idea,
You wanted me to believe you liked me,
I swear I regret July 23rd,
I was on a break down,
I should have sealed my lip shut,
I shut my body out of me.

Wait for an outcome of a year?
Then when a year comes, you will play me again,
I won’t let that happen,
I am moving on,
Too late for you,
Cuz you will never get this chance again,
When you want me,
I will say No,
Cuz you lost your chance,
I found someone.




Copyright © ruthie1983 ... [ 2005-08-13 01:38:27]
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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:16:09 AM AEST
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Very angry and bitter. Nice write


Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:06:42 PM AEST
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Well, sometimes ppl cant get or do what they need and want to do. Obstacles get put up in front.yes you can conquer them, but sometimes its just not feesiable. Do understand your write, and the hurt, you have.! I do hope you get things worked out, for the beat. Good post.!

Brew~




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