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I hate that smell more than ever and the sound of breathing freaks me out.
I can see your outline in the shadow as you stumble into my room… AGAIN.

This is nothing new… I would try to fake that I were asleep,
but that doesn’t work… I have tried one too many times before.

Always let down by my failure and stupidity… why don’t I just say no,
wait I tried that already too… God PUT ME DOWN I don’t want to go to your room.

I know what you're going to do… I think you need a girlfriend,
I'm your daughter REMEMBER??… I want my mommy!

Actually, no I don’t… it's her fault I'm here in the first place,
she told you to get me, and let you drag me away… I screamed.

She wouldn’t save me… was I a bad little girl… I was only 5 years old,
did she not want me anymore … what happen to beware of strangers ?

MOMMY… WHERE ARE YOU!!! WHY DIDN’T YOU SAVE ME!!
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THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!

Contributed by brokenandinlove16 on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 03:48:02 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD!

I hate that smell more than ever and the sound of breathing freaks me out.
I can see your outline in the shadow as you stumble into my room… AGAIN.

This is nothing new… I would try to fake that I were asleep,
but that doesn’t work… I have tried one too many times before.

Always let down by my failure and stupidity… why don’t I just say no,
wait I tried that already too… God PUT ME DOWN I don’t want to go to your room.

I know what you're going to do… I think you need a girlfriend,
I'm your daughter REMEMBER??… I want my mommy!

Actually, no I don’t… it's her fault I'm here in the first place,
she told you to get me, and let you drag me away… I screamed.

She wouldn’t save me… was I a bad little girl… I was only 5 years old,
did she not want me anymore … what happen to beware of strangers ?

MOMMY… WHERE ARE YOU!!! WHY DIDN’T YOU SAVE ME!!

Copyright © brokenandinlove16 ... [ 2005-08-12 15:48:02]
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Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD! (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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i think is very sad and the unheard cry shows through your poetry.....im sorry its hard being so young....xxx

Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD! (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:30:55 PM AEST
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Great write... shows alot of emotion, undealt anger.

I know you probablt don't want to hear this, but - from one shattered child, it does get easier to deal with believe it or not and in time you can put it behibd you (or so I've been told LOL)

Sonya

Re: THE UNHEARD CRY OF A CHILD! (User Rating: 1 )
by thepizzaguy on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:38:25 PM AEST
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It's a very depressing poem. I feel sorry that everything that has happened to you in your life, well, happened. Cheer up, life's going to get better, i promise.

--Steve

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