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Array ( [sid] => 103224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Screams [time] => 2005-08-11 01:40:18 [hometext] => About being away from someone [bodytext] => We run these same races
At the same paces
Time and distance put us at two different places

So, look to the sky and we see the same stars
But no matter how loud I scream, space won't let you hear me.

I'm screaming "I love you's" to the top of my lungs,
While gasping for a new breath of life.

These silent screams have gone unnoticed,
So put time and space aside for a moment,
Sit with me on this cloud, until death do us part
And I'll pull down the stars for you [comments] => 6 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => fromhopes2hopeless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Silent Screams

Contributed by fromhopes2hopeless on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:40:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We run these same races
At the same paces
Time and distance put us at two different places

So, look to the sky and we see the same stars
But no matter how loud I scream, space won't let you hear me.

I'm screaming "I love you's" to the top of my lungs,
While gasping for a new breath of life.

These silent screams have gone unnoticed,
So put time and space aside for a moment,
Sit with me on this cloud, until death do us part
And I'll pull down the stars for you

Copyright © fromhopes2hopeless ... [ 2005-08-11 01:40:18]
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Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by rockergirl94 on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:07:10 AM AEST
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This poem really describes long distance relationships (or just plain being away from someone). I love the line,

"So, look to the sky and we see the same stars
But no matter how loud I scream, space won't let you hear me."

It really puts things in perspective and pretty much sums up the poem. You can feel so close to a person, but yet be so far away. I love your ending line as well, and how it goes back to something mentioned above in the poem.

Keep writing

- Julie

Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:39:20 AM AEST
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deep, i can relate at this point in time."These silent screams have gone unnoticed" niecly said... it hurts

Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:24:56 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. Long distance takes a lot of work from both sides. Sadly usually one side gives up before the other does.

Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:17:11 AM AEST
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Wow~ I can really relate to this write being that I have been involved in a long distance relationship now for almost a year. Awaiting next month when we will be together permanently. Can't tell you how many times I have felt like this paritcular line in your write:

I'm screaming "I love you's" to the top of my lungs,
While gasping for a new breath of life.

Good write, and I hope you're not apart for too long.

~Blue~

Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:48:07 PM AEST
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Nice write.. Missin someone so badly takes a toll on your everyday life...
Keep your chin up... time knows no meaning of Love..
wishing you best of luck.. keep up the writing..
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:51:20 PM AEST
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Great write, I especially liked *I'm screaming "I love you's" to the top of my lungs,
While gasping for a new breath of life.*

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