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Array ( [sid] => 103220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorry no more [time] => 2005-08-11 00:42:38 [hometext] => kind of bitter, but oh well [bodytext] => I need to write
it helps me to breathe.
Without it, I fear
All sanity would leave.

The words are not pretty,
but honest and real.
Love, hate, betrayal, sex
all sad, but still true.
She's blunt, she's offensive,
but always sincere.
You won't understand me
I'm too filled with fear.

Emotion is deadly,
It burns to the core.
I WON'T let you know me,
go ahead and abhor. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 48 [informant] => anitajames [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Sorry no more

Contributed by anitajames on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:42:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I need to write
it helps me to breathe.
Without it, I fear
All sanity would leave.

The words are not pretty,
but honest and real.
Love, hate, betrayal, sex
all sad, but still true.
She's blunt, she's offensive,
but always sincere.
You won't understand me
I'm too filled with fear.

Emotion is deadly,
It burns to the core.
I WON'T let you know me,
go ahead and abhor.

Copyright © anitajames ... [ 2005-08-11 00:42:38]
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Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:51:03 AM AEST
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Good write. Reminds me of me. I liked it

Brooke

Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by fromhopes2hopeless on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:20:14 AM AEST
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Nice. I like it simply because of the line.. Emotion is deadly.

Dakota

Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by fromhopes2hopeless on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:20:18 AM AEST
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Nice. I like it simply because of the line.. Emotion is deadly.

Dakota

Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:56:12 PM AEST
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Good write, sums up alot of feelings I've had.

Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:07:07 PM AEST
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Sounds like someone has low self esteem and needs to do some self reflection. Living life this way will certainly be a downer and in the end will lead to unnecessary stress and self hatred. I hope this is not you and just a character in your mind or an acquaintance.

Rita

Re: Sorry no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:19:03 AM AEST
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At least paper can be your outlet. It, at least, does not judge you in any way. Well done, I pray your sorrow may cease soon.
Take care,
David

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