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Array ( [sid] => 103212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lifetime Of Pain [time] => 2005-08-10 22:27:28 [hometext] => just a release of things i could not say... plz comment [bodytext] =>
im filled with pain
by the ones who i loved the most
i have nothing left to gain
i want to go to the coast

maybe jump into the ocean
letting the waves take me to sea
i have so much emotion
here is my plea

the one i love
broke my heart
i thought she was a dove
from the very start

she has doubts
and they are all about us
we have taking different routes
but they all became a mess

my grandpa is slowly dying
and no one can see his pain
insides hes crying
and he wants to catch a train

he wants the frustration to go away
he wants to live to see his grandkids grow older
all he does is pray
buts its just making him colder

growing up was hard
because i had no mother
it felt like i was always on gaurd
some way or another

she could die
for all i care
all she did was lie
and that i swear

she'd come home drunk
or with a guy that was a dick
she was nothing but junk
and she made me sick

my life is filled with so much pain
sometimes i wonder if i should stay
theres nothing left to gain
but i will make it to the next day
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Lifetime Of Pain

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




im filled with pain
by the ones who i loved the most
i have nothing left to gain
i want to go to the coast

maybe jump into the ocean
letting the waves take me to sea
i have so much emotion
here is my plea

the one i love
broke my heart
i thought she was a dove
from the very start

she has doubts
and they are all about us
we have taking different routes
but they all became a mess

my grandpa is slowly dying
and no one can see his pain
insides hes crying
and he wants to catch a train

he wants the frustration to go away
he wants to live to see his grandkids grow older
all he does is pray
buts its just making him colder

growing up was hard
because i had no mother
it felt like i was always on gaurd
some way or another

she could die
for all i care
all she did was lie
and that i swear

she'd come home drunk
or with a guy that was a dick
she was nothing but junk
and she made me sick

my life is filled with so much pain
sometimes i wonder if i should stay
theres nothing left to gain
but i will make it to the next day




Copyright © sbhottie288 ... [ 2005-08-10 22:27:28]
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Re: Lifetime Of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:34:34 PM AEST
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good write .. but I'm so sorry for all of your pain .. my childhood was a lot like yours.. and we so make it somehow..


Re: Lifetime Of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:18:00 AM AEST
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Very deep, sad, touching, heart wrenching masterpeice.
Han tuff, friend.
huggs,
emy




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