Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 10-June 20:26:24 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 103116 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To simply know you... [time] => 2005-08-09 21:37:05 [hometext] => I miss her so much... I dont know where she is... I just wish I could be near her... [bodytext] => what i want to say to you
to call out and tell you
to explain this longing
this desire
but the words dont come
nothing I can do to show you
this love, this want
to simply know you
to be there
to share
to give to you and provide
to tell you all I see
your caring
your beauty
the way you laugh
your smile lights my day
I long to touch your skin
or taste your lips
to hear those words
escape you...
so much I want to tell you
but so little I can say
knowing nothing would change
so i watch you
leave me behind
I'll never know that pleasure
to hold you and caress
run my hands down you
and wait to hear you
whisper my name...
call out to me
command me
tell me what you want
tell me who you need,
I want to be him...
to be in...
your heart
to hold your love
to hold you love...
to feel your pulse
your sweat
flow over me
drown me in your sea
release what we both have,
trapped deep inside
I see you through the cracks
the imperfections in my soul
and I watch you
your more than me...
more than I can be...
so i'll try,
to stay behind the shadows
out of sight and out of mind
i dont want to fade in your eyes
i need for you
to call to me
say anything
about me
about you
about us...
something...
the more I say
the less you hear
I need you
to hold me near
and push them all away
hide me behind your walls
catch me when I fall
forgive me when I fail
this longing...
this fear...
overwhelming my senses
show me everything
that im not allowed to have
release this pain in me
give me a reason,
I only want to know you... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 402 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
To simply know you...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



what i want to say to you
to call out and tell you
to explain this longing
this desire
but the words dont come
nothing I can do to show you
this love, this want
to simply know you
to be there
to share
to give to you and provide
to tell you all I see
your caring
your beauty
the way you laugh
your smile lights my day
I long to touch your skin
or taste your lips
to hear those words
escape you...
so much I want to tell you
but so little I can say
knowing nothing would change
so i watch you
leave me behind
I'll never know that pleasure
to hold you and caress
run my hands down you
and wait to hear you
whisper my name...
call out to me
command me
tell me what you want
tell me who you need,
I want to be him...
to be in...
your heart
to hold your love
to hold you love...
to feel your pulse
your sweat
flow over me
drown me in your sea
release what we both have,
trapped deep inside
I see you through the cracks
the imperfections in my soul
and I watch you
your more than me...
more than I can be...
so i'll try,
to stay behind the shadows
out of sight and out of mind
i dont want to fade in your eyes
i need for you
to call to me
say anything
about me
about you
about us...
something...
the more I say
the less you hear
I need you
to hold me near
and push them all away
hide me behind your walls
catch me when I fall
forgive me when I fail
this longing...
this fear...
overwhelming my senses
show me everything
that im not allowed to have
release this pain in me
give me a reason,
I only want to know you...




Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2005-08-09 21:37:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by EmoDCgirl36 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:58:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I love it. When you read it it makes you feel like you need to know the person that stole your heart. You can actually tangibly feel your heartache and though I am upset to say this but I enjoyed it. Makes me feel that I'm not alone in this pain. Thanks for giving me a sense of knowing I'm not alone sometimes.


Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:15:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Brought me to tears 1--because of the things in my life right now and 2-- because I'm prone to crying tonight.

Love and peace,

Chelsea


Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:46:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
beautiful aand heartbreaking.


Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 07:21:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Another wonderfully written heartfelt emotional feel your emothons made me cry poem. I think i summoned everything up. Its again beautiful.


Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:13:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
good write.


Re: To simply know you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:47:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I like to read poetry that I feel something in common with or that makes me feel. Your poem did both. I don't know what I would do if someone wrote something like this for me. I can't imagine it but, I think I would definitely pause and see them in a most unique way.

You write with such heart and soul. You've moved me and I imagine everyone will feel this poem.

Kie




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com