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Array ( [sid] => 103111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pretending [time] => 2005-08-09 21:01:19 [hometext] => Have you ever pretended to be something ur not? Well...i always am! [bodytext] => I'm trying to tell you
I'm not the happy little gurl ya'll know
I was just pretending
....Just putting on a show

I didnt want you to worry
Or try to help me out
But i really didn't think you cared
Now I know this without a doubt

You're always yelling
And calling my name
You tell me that having me
Is a family shame

Now im starting to see
]That you were right
I'm a worthless, pathetic, loser,
That can't see the light

You hurt me so much
With everything you say
And I can't take it anymore
What's the price i gotta pay?

You're tearing me apart
And you've broken me inside
Now all of my feeling
I have to hide

I hide them
And i don't let anyone see
'Cause in someone elses eyes
Pityful, is something I do not want to be

It's already bad enough
And i dont need to let people know
I just hurt so much inside
And i could never let that show! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 48 [informant] => misunderstood_gurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Pretending

Contributed by misunderstood_gurl on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm trying to tell you
I'm not the happy little gurl ya'll know
I was just pretending
....Just putting on a show

I didnt want you to worry
Or try to help me out
But i really didn't think you cared
Now I know this without a doubt

You're always yelling
And calling my name
You tell me that having me
Is a family shame

Now im starting to see
]That you were right
I'm a worthless, pathetic, loser,
That can't see the light

You hurt me so much
With everything you say
And I can't take it anymore
What's the price i gotta pay?

You're tearing me apart
And you've broken me inside
Now all of my feeling
I have to hide

I hide them
And i don't let anyone see
'Cause in someone elses eyes
Pityful, is something I do not want to be

It's already bad enough
And i dont need to let people know
I just hurt so much inside
And i could never let that show!

Copyright © misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-08-09 21:01:19]
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Re: Pretending (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:05:57 PM AEST
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well i hope poetry makes you feel better like it does me nice write

Re: Pretending (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:11:12 PM AEST
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Nice write...two thumps up!!

Re: Pretending (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:18:52 PM AEST
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i would have to say what i like most about your writings is the realness you put into it. it doesnt seem like you just write stories, you write about life.

Re: Pretending (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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oh, sad, but great write! and don't worry, you aren't alone, remember, i'm the same way. just talk to me when you need someone to talk to. i'm a friend, remember? well, it was a great write anyways! keep up the good work!

please, don't feel like you have to pretend around me!

~sprints

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