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Array ( [sid] => 103043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's Too Bad.. [time] => 2005-08-08 23:59:42 [hometext] => Scratch The Slate//Erase The Scars -- [bodytext] => I believed it when I heard it
Those words that made me feel alive
They poured from your bitter sweet lips,
Remind me to let this pain subside.

It's too bad if you need me now
I don't feel the slightest need for you
Scratch the slate, erase the scars
I'm running out of sympathy for you..

It's a shame you lost it all,
Excuses at the tip of your tongue
With my one last gasping breathe
I promise to never let you know..
I'm miserable.

Don't bother trying to explain it
Regardless you know I'll fall apart..
And It's too bad if you need me now..
I never wanted you from the start..

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It's Too Bad..

Contributed by lickalolipop on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:59:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I believed it when I heard it
Those words that made me feel alive
They poured from your bitter sweet lips,
Remind me to let this pain subside.

It's too bad if you need me now
I don't feel the slightest need for you
Scratch the slate, erase the scars
I'm running out of sympathy for you..

It's a shame you lost it all,
Excuses at the tip of your tongue
With my one last gasping breathe
I promise to never let you know..
I'm miserable.

Don't bother trying to explain it
Regardless you know I'll fall apart..
And It's too bad if you need me now..
I never wanted you from the start..

Copyright © lickalolipop ... [ 2005-08-08 23:59:42]
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Re: It's Too Bad.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:08:45 AM AEST
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Your poem reminds me so much of a song by Aretha Franklyn called "You're running out of fools" I don't quite remember how it goes but your poem has the same theme. Great write

Re: It's Too Bad.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:46:15 AM AEST
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I really liked, the ending, but I do not know, the other stanzas kind of threw me off.

Re: It's Too Bad.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:53:21 AM AEST
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That was so sad but at the same time very lovely. Great way to express your feelings.

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