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The Profile
Contributed by
Amanda_Interrupted
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You think you are so special
You're not
I fell into your deception
Your words on paper
Your ignorance turned bliss
Oh, how magical four syllabls can be
Sweet sensational stories
Your brilliance was only a fabricated facade
Your pathalogical rants are not only self destructive
You've expelled your disease into me
You only admire Avalanche
You are nothing of the sort
You beg for the parentals to contemplate
You so freely use the words "fake" and "phony"
But you, you fit the profile
-Amanda Bentley
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Amanda_Interrupted
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2005-08-06 19:58:08]
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Re: The Profile
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:37:59 PM AEST
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Good work.
very creative.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Profile
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:49:23 AM AEST
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great write,and ery expressive.This would've helped me let a bunch of crap out,like im sure it did to you too.I understand how you felt.Keep it up.peace.
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andrea |
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