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Array ( [sid] => 102712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm a Fake [time] => 2005-08-05 01:50:22 [hometext] => Written 7/1/05 [bodytext] => I'm sick of this smart girl act,
(It's fake)
Tired of pretending I have tact,
(I only did it for your sake)
Bored with being a good little girl,
(Time for that mold to break)
I'm shallow, worried about that one hair that curls,
(A habit I can't seem to shake)
I try to hide my emotions, but fail,
(My tears are so numerous you could fill a lake)
And why must I flirt with every male?
(Perverted am I, both sleeping and awake)
Witty and charming,
(With words as deadly as a snake)
Pretty and smart,
(Amazing what a mask can make)
Kill me, hate me,
(Help me, save me -- I'm so fake) [comments] => 6 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 71 [informant] => killingmehslowly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

I'm a Fake

Contributed by killingmehslowly on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:50:22 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

I'm sick of this smart girl act,
(It's fake)
Tired of pretending I have tact,
(I only did it for your sake)
Bored with being a good little girl,
(Time for that mold to break)
I'm shallow, worried about that one hair that curls,
(A habit I can't seem to shake)
I try to hide my emotions, but fail,
(My tears are so numerous you could fill a lake)
And why must I flirt with every male?
(Perverted am I, both sleeping and awake)
Witty and charming,
(With words as deadly as a snake)
Pretty and smart,
(Amazing what a mask can make)
Kill me, hate me,
(Help me, save me -- I'm so fake)

Copyright © killingmehslowly ... [ 2005-08-05 01:50:22]
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Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:59:20 AM AEST
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we all seem to hide part of us for someone else, good write..
tasha

Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:05:12 AM AEST
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awesome write,no one is perfect not even using a mask to hide the real us,its ok,i dont hate u,and if ppl do hate u its probably bc they're jealous,dont worry u'll realize ur just living a normal life as soon as u see others living the double lives as well,good write keep up the great job!!

Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:29:19 AM AEST
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I liked the formatting for this. It was very artistic. It's a sad thing to write but your emotions are portrayed so well. Nice write.

Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by davemaps on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:31:12 AM AEST
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good poem no one is perfect good rymes

Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:50:32 AM AEST
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i like the formatting in this and the way you bluntly face your problem. good write.

Re: I'm a Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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nicely done

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