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Array ( [sid] => 10270 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Asthenia [time] => 2003-01-12 21:00:00 [hometext] => Asthenia means loosing strength. If you have any questions about this poem, please post them in the comments. If this poem comfuses you please tell me. [bodytext] => Asthenia
Never think your loosing strenght in love.
You'll always need it.
She'll think he's cheating,
He'll think shes a paranoid *****
It will all even out after the fighting.
The treturous fighting.
During this particular time,
you will think you are loosing asthenia in your relationship.
You don't know it but your gaining everything.
If you don't feel this while your in a relationship,
It's not worth it.
Something is terribly wrong.
This is the only time you'll be loosing asthenia [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Paperdoll [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Asthenia

Contributed by Paperdoll on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Asthenia
Never think your loosing strenght in love.
You'll always need it.
She'll think he's cheating,
He'll think shes a paranoid *****
It will all even out after the fighting.
The treturous fighting.
During this particular time,
you will think you are loosing asthenia in your relationship.
You don't know it but your gaining everything.
If you don't feel this while your in a relationship,
It's not worth it.
Something is terribly wrong.
This is the only time you'll be loosing asthenia

Copyright © Paperdoll ... [ 2003-01-12 21:00:00]
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Re: Asthenia (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:06:50 PM AEST
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not all love is based on strenght,,its based on love,,faith,,and trust,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: Asthenia (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 12:57:04 PM AEST
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One thing I am very confused about... if asthenia is the loss or lack of strength, then losing asthenia would be the opposite. Not necessarily gaining strength, but something along those lines. So... to lose asthenia would be a good thing. So in your 9th and 10th lines (counting Asthenia, the repeated title, as the first line) I think you have missed your own point. Now... to have said some one was loosing asthenia into their relationship, as if this pent up thing had gotten loose when it shouldn't have, now that would make more sense. But, everywhere I see the word loosing, I know you meant losing, so I know that this is not the case. Anyway... I hope you understand why this poem seems to make no sense to me.

Re: Asthenia (User Rating: 1 )
by boricuacd on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:15:40 PM AEST
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good job

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