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What I miss most
Contributed by
needs_change
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have been here once or twice before
It's a battle inside, an ongoing war
The thoughts that I thought I had left behind
Now they are back and won't leave my mind
And oddly enough
I miss the blood
The tears that I cried
That killed me inside
The painful burning inside of my chest
The desperate yourning for a cut on my wrist
The way it felt as the blood bled away
The way it relieved all of my pain
The notes that I wrote and the words inside them
The tears that I shed as I signed them
Ever since then everything's been ok
But I realize it was all a charade
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2005-08-04 00:49:15]
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Re: What I miss most
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:18:16 AM AEST
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this is very emotional.I've felt your pain over and over,and thought that it would work if i tried it once,but no.Well,theres always a light on.Not all scars show,not all wounds heal,sometimes you can't always see the pain someone feels.Just some words,but theres hope too.keep up the great write.t/c.
love,
andrea |
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Re: What I miss most
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:22:11 AM AEST
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| Nice writing... I feel for you...... Keep up the good work |
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