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Array ( [sid] => 102496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Destroying Us All [time] => 2005-08-02 11:04:47 [hometext] => my best friend's dad is ruining her life and i just want her to know that i am always here-- this is for you, jennie! [bodytext] => You are talking of death,
Causing me a lot of stress,
Your father ruins your life,
Basically stabbing mine with a knife

Life is hard for you to cope,
Making me reach for my rope
I hate to see you live like this,
I知 with you through all of it

But if anything ever happens to you
I am going down with you, too
If you are token from life
I知 killing myself with the knife

If your father would just back away,
We would all make it day-by-day
But with him cutting into your space,
It feels like I知 getting punched in the face

Whenever he causes you pain
Anger drives through all of my veins
I wish that you and I could switch lives
So I could take all the blows and drives

I rather have the pain done to me
Instead of you, don稚 you see?
I hate to have to hurt like this,
Feeling like you are falling in an abyss

So when your father hurts you,
The pain is brought to me, too
I hate to see my best friend struggle in life
It always makes me want to grab the knife

But I have to be strong for you
And be next to you all the time, too
I am here when your father causes pain
I, too, have the anger running through my veins

When you father destroys you
He is destroying me too
When he makes you fall
He destroys us all
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Destroying Us All

Contributed by sprinter27 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:04:47 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You are talking of death,
Causing me a lot of stress,
Your father ruins your life,
Basically stabbing mine with a knife

Life is hard for you to cope,
Making me reach for my rope
I hate to see you live like this,
I知 with you through all of it

But if anything ever happens to you
I am going down with you, too
If you are token from life
I知 killing myself with the knife

If your father would just back away,
We would all make it day-by-day
But with him cutting into your space,
It feels like I知 getting punched in the face

Whenever he causes you pain
Anger drives through all of my veins
I wish that you and I could switch lives
So I could take all the blows and drives

I rather have the pain done to me
Instead of you, don稚 you see?
I hate to have to hurt like this,
Feeling like you are falling in an abyss

So when your father hurts you,
The pain is brought to me, too
I hate to see my best friend struggle in life
It always makes me want to grab the knife

But I have to be strong for you
And be next to you all the time, too
I am here when your father causes pain
I, too, have the anger running through my veins

When you father destroys you
He is destroying me too
When he makes you fall
He destroys us all




Copyright ツゥ sprinter27 ... [ 2005-08-02 11:04:47]
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Re: Destroying Us All (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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awww .. I hate issues and tissues .. but it's nice you can be strong and be there..


Re: Destroying Us All (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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awwww...sad but an awesome poem. I know its hard seeing your best friend go through all that pain and there's nothing you can do but be there for them. You're doing the best you can...Hope everyhting turns out all right.

Gr8 poem by the way!


Re: Destroying Us All (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:30:52 PM AEST
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Hi sprinter27. Your devotion for your friend comes across very clear in this piece. However, do you think yhat threatening to kill yourself will help? I mean, you're not going to be able to help if you are no longer here..

Colin




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