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[title] => That Girl
[time] => 2005-08-01 20:04:43
[hometext] => Some of my immaturity coming out. LOL It's a rant, it's a rave. It's a poet releasing some hostility. (non-violent way and legal, LOL)
[bodytext] => You list your occupation as looking sexy
Well, honey how much does that pay?
Whatcha got to do, little girl
to earn a buck by the end of the day?
You say you look like Angelina Jolie
What mirror do you look in?
Try and fool the ones who can't see you
Does it make you feel good?
You say you think yourself so beautiful
but see it's the inside that counts
No one takes you seriously anymore
We realize it's due to your mental health
Yeah, I may be older, but wiser too
had two children and may not be so lean
I am still beautiful though sister
You see, I live with my conscience clean
You told so many lies
it must be hard to keep them all straight
you have a husband, boyfriend, and a new lover
I guess that would be one for each personality
on any given day
One time you write your a christian
(that one makes me laugh)
and pray for someones elses soul
next day you comment your an atheist
Honey, you just can't be both
Oh, I know you'll retort with vulgar words
Threaten, curse and carry on
You do it each and everytime
Lie somemore and try to cover your butt,
go to Peter and whine
You've lost all friends out on the road
Everyone is just done with all your crap
Go hit yourself, blame it on me
My lord girl, really, what is up with that
I've never known someone like you
so much of a chameleon you can be
I can honestly say in the beginning
your sad stories fooled even me
Well, karma will get you Britt
it's gonna slap ya up side your head
Gonna make you pay, I'm telling you
For all the lies you've said
Laura Horner 8-1-05
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That Girl
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deadheadpoet
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:04:43 PM in AEST
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You list your occupation as looking sexy
Well, honey how much does that pay?
Whatcha got to do, little girl
to earn a buck by the end of the day?
You say you look like Angelina Jolie
What mirror do you look in?
Try and fool the ones who can't see you
Does it make you feel good?
You say you think yourself so beautiful
but see it's the inside that counts
No one takes you seriously anymore
We realize it's due to your mental health
Yeah, I may be older, but wiser too
had two children and may not be so lean
I am still beautiful though sister
You see, I live with my conscience clean
You told so many lies
it must be hard to keep them all straight
you have a husband, boyfriend, and a new lover
I guess that would be one for each personality
on any given day
One time you write your a christian
(that one makes me laugh)
and pray for someones elses soul
next day you comment your an atheist
Honey, you just can't be both
Oh, I know you'll retort with vulgar words
Threaten, curse and carry on
You do it each and everytime
Lie somemore and try to cover your butt,
go to Peter and whine
You've lost all friends out on the road
Everyone is just done with all your crap
Go hit yourself, blame it on me
My lord girl, really, what is up with that
I've never known someone like you
so much of a chameleon you can be
I can honestly say in the beginning
your sad stories fooled even me
Well, karma will get you Britt
it's gonna slap ya up side your head
Gonna make you pay, I'm telling you
For all the lies you've said
Laura Horner 8-1-05
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Re: That Girl
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:40:01 PM AEST
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Nice Laura...you said your piece and still kept your class...I like how you expressed yourself. You showed your emotions, but at the same time anchored them in before they went too far. The ending is perfect, and what you had to say in the 3, 4, and 5th stanzas was especially good : )
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Re: That Girl
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by CarolinaBlue on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:46:46 PM AEST
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Ding Ding Ding, Let's get ready to RUMBLE! ......hehe all joking aside I think you did a great job expressing yourself Laura, without trashing your dignity along the way. Good for you! Love the fifth stanza.
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Re: That Girl
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by AnastasiaN on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:55:38 PM AEST
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| i think you said it with more class than i ever could. i know lots of those types and i don't know why but sometimes i can just lose it...kudos to remaining smart and making me cackle a bit too :) lol |
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Re: That Girl
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:44:01 PM AEST
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I don't understand why people do those things. Isn't it hard to keep up with all the lies? Do they have to write them down on cheat cards and refer back if questiones? So childish. Must desperately need attention or a lobotomy. Karmic law will send the bill one day and she will be wondering what the H happened. Sad. Great write, Laura. Proud of you for keeping your dignity intact. Apparently she doesn't care.
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Re: That Girl
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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| Angelina Jolie sexy??? Let's get real .. she french kisses anything that moves .. her puffed up lips go where no man has been before .. lol does someone here brag about looking like her ????.. I'm on my knees rolling and laughing .. My god .. someone used a tire pump on those lips .. they goona 'splode soon ... don't want to be there when that happens ... |
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Re: That Girl
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by tommylover on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:50:56 PM AEST
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sooner or later fate is gonna catch up.lies and stroies only last in the moment..nobody belives all the stories and the games she's playin..from the looks of it she's hasn't looked in a real mirror in years, Angelina Joile, what is she on..Angelina has BOOBS, big lips, long brown hair, but most of all Angelina Jolie wouldn't do the things this girl does..telling lies just to make your self look good on the internet, just to get guys..shows how much respect she has for her "husband, lovers, and we can't forget the boyfriends"( i wonder which one is Pete??)one day sooner or later the lies are gonna catch up with her and nobody will be there for her..and thats the best REVENGE we could ever get..as tommy says "revenge is best served cold".....
LOL...great writing Laura
PS............420.. |
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Re: That Girl
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:19:42 PM AEST
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| wow that is really great. lol. |
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Re: That Girl
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:03:45 AM AEST
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Well Laura, you're sure giving someone a verbal thrashing. I think the confrontation was candid, yet done with dignity and class. This person, or personification, seems to exemplify everythihg counter to your belief system.
Good poem, Laura my friend
Will |
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Re: That Girl
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:17:26 PM AEST
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I loved this Laura, great write.
I wanna look like Angelina Jolie.. lol... |
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