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[aid] => mick
[title] => Together We'll see- God's Face
[time] => 2005-07-28 11:19:11
[hometext] => I had a dream or a vision...[maybe both?] anyway it went something like this....
[bodytext] =>
Bouncing balls and laughter
splashing all around
hand stands in the water
I stare and look all around
my family are all happy
happy as can be
why can't I be with them
they laugh all so happily
Clutching onto the dambs slippery edge
sloping to the water
[I love God and also
I love my son, hubby and daughters!]
I look up and I feel His spirit
what a glorious awsome sight !
I fight with my human nature
I want to be pain free tonight
No sickness or no sin
[what an sinful life were living in]
It looks so pretty up so high
I climb to start a new beginning
I'm slipping- down- towards the water
my family are all there
"how come they don't feel confused?"
they yell "come on mum, come here!"
I look up and again I see
some beautiful light -so pecious!
"which way do I head ?"
my family are all my wishes!
I hold on tight
and I surely notice
another glorious light highest of all
so powerful and full of strength
Our Heavenly father has released his rain fall
I feel totally tingly inside
The water in the damb is raised
and now I am with my family
there is no fear to hide be praised!
Slowly the water reaches
this wonderful beautiful sight
Together as a family we unite
and everything turned out just right!
Spiritual and earthly together
Living in peace and grace
Forever in harmony
because we ALL will see -God's face.
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[informant] => inoc
[notes] =>
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[ratings] => 8
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Together We'll see- God's Face
Contributed by
inoc
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:19:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Bouncing balls and laughter
splashing all around
hand stands in the water
I stare and look all around
my family are all happy
happy as can be
why can't I be with them
they laugh all so happily
Clutching onto the dambs slippery edge
sloping to the water
[I love God and also
I love my son, hubby and daughters!]
I look up and I feel His spirit
what a glorious awsome sight !
I fight with my human nature
I want to be pain free tonight
No sickness or no sin
[what an sinful life were living in]
It looks so pretty up so high
I climb to start a new beginning
I'm slipping- down- towards the water
my family are all there
"how come they don't feel confused?"
they yell "come on mum, come here!"
I look up and again I see
some beautiful light -so pecious!
"which way do I head ?"
my family are all my wishes!
I hold on tight
and I surely notice
another glorious light highest of all
so powerful and full of strength
Our Heavenly father has released his rain fall
I feel totally tingly inside
The water in the damb is raised
and now I am with my family
there is no fear to hide be praised!
Slowly the water reaches
this wonderful beautiful sight
Together as a family we unite
and everything turned out just right!
Spiritual and earthly together
Living in peace and grace
Forever in harmony
because we ALL will see -God's face.
Copyright ©
inoc
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2005-07-28 11:19:11]
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:52:48 AM AEST
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| Wow! Your poem is really good! I really like it and i think that it is very happy! |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:26:41 PM AEST
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| I loved that! i mean it was awesome. i loved the message and flow of your poem. and i love to read poems about God...it just makes me happy...especially since i just woke up this morning...and the first poem i read was yours...thank you. Keep up the good work...that was awesome! |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:30:07 PM AEST
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| Great poem well done and keep them coming ^^ |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:06:17 PM AEST
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:) It's great that you've got so much faith in God :D keep your faith!!!
This poem is truely inspirational
God Bless
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:08:29 PM AEST
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| this was a sweet and insightful poem. isnt it just wonderful when God dips his golden finger into the pool of our thoguhts? It makes us better people, i think. anyways great write. |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:36:50 PM AEST
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This gave me some nice images...I like the style you wrote it in too...Nice job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:40:53 PM AEST
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How wonderful a write this is.
Almost a standstill moment in time.. a great recognition..
of everyone and everything in motion around us..
We know where we belong now, and where we will be going one day..
yet we are where we are, until we get that real peace.. the real understanding of what real peace is..
Until then, we just join in.. love our closest ones around us..
It is trying to hold on.. to something slippery.. looking up.. checking out how beautiful it is and will be.. grasping onto the truth..
I sit back and view others around me.. I stop to try to connect up with them, plus.. God..
Let the water raise up high.. lets just float right up there lol...
Thank you for posting... a very, very tranquil write..for the minds and spirits in all of us..
5 stars my friend..
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:59:14 PM AEST
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beatiful, inspiring hope and trust in the infinite mercy of God.
Thanks for sharing this work with us and may many find a source of strength in it.
Elizabetyh |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:02:57 AM AEST
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| I definately wish for that. My family is scattered apart right now. but maybe something will bring us together somehow. |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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I think this is a wonderful poem, and will bring hope to people who are i'll or suffering
I love it. thanks. xx.
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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| What a glorious promise you have shown us in your most excellent of poems. I will just say Amen. Bernard |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:22:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful words. sad at first. then a smile. |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:03:49 AM AEST
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This indeed is a great poem. I was reading a passage in the bible that goes something like this:
"How great is the love God has lavished on us that we should be called the children of God and that is what we are"
Quote from 1 John 3:1a |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:06:43 AM AEST
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An awesome dream.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Together We'll see- God's Face
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:15:13 AM AEST
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a great write. keep up the great work. god bless and best wishes.
~Justin L.~ |
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