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no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
no one would notice
can you smell it the sweet smell of death
you are so close take an extra pill
guns are good too for that long time rest
but once your gone you can forget the cutting
forget beating yourself
once you are gone you can not come back to do it agian
so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it
make it painful so it can feel as good as it does thinking about it
no one loves you no one cares
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Just Disappear

Contributed by russ-dawg on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

it would be so much better with out you here
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
no one would notice
can you smell it the sweet smell of death
you are so close take an extra pill
guns are good too for that long time rest
but once your gone you can forget the cutting
forget beating yourself
once you are gone you can not come back to do it agian
so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it
make it painful so it can feel as good as it does thinking about it
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear

Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-07-28 00:15:02]
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Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
I can relate 'cause before I got on the right anti depressent I use to have these thoughts-n-feelings.
huggs,
emy

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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it's very sad that you felt this way... it's good to know that you're better now though...

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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it's full of anguish and sadness... but it's message is heard. it's a very good expression of your feelings

keep up the fine writing

dW

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexi_Lexi on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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It is a very good poem and i know how u felt so i think that it is good 2just let it all out! Well done! xx

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by Beni on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:17:45 PM AEST
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This is a good poem well done. This shows the extent to which life can lead and i completely understand how you feel as i have been in this position. This shows the true feelings of how people cope to those who don't understand.

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by AnaBanana on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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nice!

Re: Just Disappear (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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A powerful write. The line 'so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it' is the best part of the poem. Though I think you could do a lot more with this poem. It has the feeling of only being the first stanza or two of a great poem. Add to it, describe the possible deaths and what comes after them. Keep posting.

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