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Used up.
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:26:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm tearing at my hair
don;t act like you really care
for me
you tell me you love me
I'm sure it was a mistake of homonym
Why, your attack was scathing
you left me there bleeding
from the slit in my heart
Boy, was it a deep cut
Things have never been do fraught
don't understand and so very caught
wondering where did we go wrong?
how can I be strong?
Existing is a living torment
I think I've just hit rock bottom
Every word you speak covered in a layer of sweeterner
you were so good, you made me waver
and quiver with pleasure
you made me feel like I was special
but then you left me
but not after you used me
I was left torn
Across the road messily strewned
Stripped of my pride
No longer just fright......
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2005-07-25 11:26:32]
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Re: Used up.
(User Rating: 1 )
by cooley1818 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:50:12 AM AEST
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