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Signatures By
The Tired Lion

Reside then my mind
alas heart whose kind,
that metaphysical force
a silent code of morse,
~
Waft faire winds to you
within my point of view,
Aye, mere soft centering
minds bethought entering,
~
From where I sit
faire 'la melody,
merchant vessel
meant to nestle,
~
Oh, now you hear?
dear core sonneteer,
take hold of; appear!
lifes no longer austere.

~x~

[comments] => 9 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ladyfawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 44 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Melodious

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Signatures By
The Tired Lion

Reside then my mind
alas heart whose kind,
that metaphysical force
a silent code of morse,
~
Waft faire winds to you
within my point of view,
Aye, mere soft centering
minds bethought entering,
~
From where I sit
faire 'la melody,
merchant vessel
meant to nestle,
~
Oh, now you hear?
dear core sonneteer,
take hold of; appear!
lifes no longer austere.

~x~

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-01-11 03:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:24:46 AM AEST
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Can't understand why it got no reads,
I enjoyed it, especially the last verse.
Very different however.
Hugz

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:27:17 AM AEST
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good write,

well done

it requires work to read,but well worth the effort!

john +

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:01:33 AM AEST
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This is wonderful, Nessa. Thank you for posting it here so it can be enjoyed, as it was meant to be. I like your cryptic weave of thoughts in this one.

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:21:11 AM AEST
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i enjoyed it very much Nessa..can't understand why it wasn't read

Shari

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 09:07:03 AM AEST
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wellwritten keepmcomin,,,,,,,,spooky

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:23:11 AM AEST
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lt becomes a little clearer all the time

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:42:00 PM AEST
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Obviously we like it!! I don't understand why it wasn't read either. It is quite challenging to read and comprehend, but I think that makes it very unique. Wonderful words and a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing!!
juliette

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by InexactExactness on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 01:11:19 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed the "old english" form of writing you've incorporated in this poem...it causes me to think about what it is that you're saying and then when i think about it i understand it just that much more. It's one of those poems you have to read over and over just to get a deeper sense of what you're talking about...i really enjoyed it...very nice write

Re: Melodious (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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Hmm I liked this a very stimulating, short read. Can't think of ne thing new to say that hasn't been said.

Bobo (Joel)

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