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[aid] => mick
[title] => Vision of Love
[time] => 2005-07-20 12:14:21
[hometext] => Dreaming of love...
[bodytext] => I can picture it all right before my eyes
the connection, commitment, no more goodbyes
Visions of love, lust, even a family is seen
it all seems so right, so peaceful and serene
Flickers of memories that have yet to take place
walking towards love at an unhurried pace
From ventures in Rome, to Mexico on the beach
it's right there before me, yet out of my reach
Who is this man that awakens my dreams?
Who will take my heart and lovingly redeem?
Sensual moments I can see and feel so well
your touch...caress...your love inside me swell
Laying in bed beside you, no more lonely nights
I can see it all so clearly, yet it's not within my sights
[comments] => 21
[counter] => 329
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[informant] => hauntedscorp
[notes] => |||||||Edited, as requested in the Site Help forum. ---Moderator_14|||||||
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Vision of Love
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hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:14:21 PM in AEST
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I can picture it all right before my eyes
the connection, commitment, no more goodbyes
Visions of love, lust, even a family is seen
it all seems so right, so peaceful and serene
Flickers of memories that have yet to take place
walking towards love at an unhurried pace
From ventures in Rome, to Mexico on the beach
it's right there before me, yet out of my reach
Who is this man that awakens my dreams?
Who will take my heart and lovingly redeem?
Sensual moments I can see and feel so well
your touch...caress...your love inside me swell
Laying in bed beside you, no more lonely nights
I can see it all so clearly, yet it's not within my sights
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:18:04 PM AEST
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| nice write. can relate top this at the moment. christopher. |
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:35:18 PM AEST
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| Keep dreaming sister, dreams do come true. Peace to you. Laura |
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by thepizzaguy on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 01:54:54 PM AEST
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| What up Chris? Nice writing you did here. I especially like how you emphasize the questions with italics. Keep up the good writing. |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 02:50:30 PM AEST
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scorp excellent job expressing yourself
i loved it
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Re: Vision of Love
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 04:14:28 PM AEST
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It will come when the time is right. Don't be impatient and try not to push the issue. We often get in the way of love by trying to rush it.
Rita |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by CarolinaBlue on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:32:09 PM AEST
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Scorp, you did a lovely job expressing this particular feeling that unfortunately so many people share or have had at some time in their lives. I feel ya, but don't worry when you least expect it, the love bug will creep up out of nowhere and bite ya for sure! :-) Good write.
~Blue~ |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:24:57 AM AEST
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sad write but beautiful thought scorp and of course as usual a nice style u have . . .
Ben |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:56:30 AM AEST
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Scorpi !!!!! If you find him ... ask him if he has a sister !!! LOL
There is a fabulous wistful melancholy mood that I am left with after reading this.
I too like the questions italicized ... I think it is ... Scorpalicious.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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Aw, that was really nice Scorp! Excellent write. "the connection, commitment, no more goodbyes"...excellent dream. :)
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Re: Vision of Love
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 07:41:43 AM AEST
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'Tis marvelous Scorp, just amazing what dreaming can do for a person. Without dreams there would be no hope for mankind, and for you either. I throughly fell into your dream, I felt everything you felt, and was delighted in doing so. Take it easy Scorp, it is said, and is so true. A butterfly will land on your shoulder if you are very quiet, and hold very still.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:03:21 PM AEST
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Great write Scorp..
Dreams don't die, only hopes
so keep hope alive and your dreams will come true-
Peace..
B
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:12:14 PM AEST
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Ah yes dearest Scorp our heart's one true desire. to find true love. Be patient my dear friend for it shall come to u in time. You see I live up to my name, Eternal Dreamer.
As always you've written this so well Scorp. You are a truly talented poetess who writes with such perfection.
Hugs and prayers 4 u,
Dreamer |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:26:56 AM AEST
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you words flow into visions and fill my mind
ahh
so beautiful |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:27:44 AM AEST
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you words flow into visions and fill my mind
ahh
so beautiful |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:40:32 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful vision Scorp and one you deserve!!!!
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:40:32 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful vision Scorp and one you deserve!!!!
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:13:09 AM AEST
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| Well... I haven't been to Rome yet, but everything else falls into place. Seriously, the thing is to find a *flexible* and *capable of growth* relationship and two people who can put a lot of work into the relationship. Even then, it doesn't happen all at once. I like the way you drew the picture of your dreams. Blessings, J. |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 12:09:25 AM AEST
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| Hi Scorp, I just wanted to say hi, this was a beautifull poem, I absolutly loved it, to tell the truth, I wish I could write something that had about 16 comments on it, heh, keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:54:13 AM AEST
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| your romantic flows Inspire me |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 05:34:06 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, it does not so much seem sad to me as full
of longing and hope, truelove will come if it has not already, just
be sure you are not at the airport when your ship comes into harbor:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Vision of Love
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th January 2021 @ 02:19:14 AM AEST
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This touched the heart of an Irish WOP.
Beautifully written and it hits home.
You can be a nice person that is honorable and moral and one who achieves their goals but that won/'/t get you what you want or deserve.
Just being the opposite usually will.
Very sad and I may have stretched the context a bit but that is what is great about poetry, it is open to interpretation just like the bible.
Stunning write Scorp! |
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