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Fifteen
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:18:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Seven years weve lasted long Weve good memories and bad Through blissful times and blistered rhymes Together happy, together sad The days were hard on us we know A guy, a love, a good friend dead Many a tear shed in injustice Cruel words have been said Ive done my fair share of guilt And youve done the same But even with our arguments Neither of us are to blame I sing to the stars on this day A finality not, but a continuation Your life far from pointless Taken away be your desperation Pain does happen; its part of life You have endured for fifteen years Happiness, sorrow, pain, and love Friendship, distress, pleasure, and tears All in all youre my best friend Believe me when I say to you You are brilliant, AMAZING In every single thing you do You are beautiful with such a soul Do not run away and do not hide If you call out for help in a time of need Know I will always be at your side Hidden beneath pain is happiness Find your beauty under your doubt You have no clue how much you mean to me I believe in you, believe in yourself I love ya Casey, never forget You can reach any dream These seven years have been great so far Lets keep em coming happy fifteenth
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Re: Fifteen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:26:25 PM AEST (User
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Very deep poem there blue_angel..
Have you ever considered writing for Hallmark cards.. or check out other areas..
I enjoy how you put your words together..
They can fit any type of emotional fair.
Keep writing.. great piece.. thank you for posting it.
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: Fifteen
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:37:16 AM AEST (User
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| A good write to a friend not one of my favorits of yours but it was good and I'm sure your friend will love to get it from you. take care and keep up the writes. friends like these are wonderful and I'm glad you have one....Steve |
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