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Array ( [sid] => 1016 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Home [time] => 2002-07-23 13:40:51 [hometext] => This is the first thing i wrote that was intended to be song lyrics. my friends (who are still working on putting the band together completely) might use them in a song. tell me what you think! [bodytext] => Home


Here I am, a bit confused
I’m feeling lost, and feeling used
Broken down and hated, unloved and all
I don’t know how to make you stall

Let me go, you spineless fool
You treat me like nothing, as if I were your tool
Love is rough, and painful, too
And you know I say this because of you

You don’t know how it feels to hate
How it feels to bleed as you wait
To hate it all, so strong and unreal
You don’t know what it’s like to feel

(Chorus)
You have no clue, no clue at all
You don’t try to catch me, as I fall
You let me go, I’m on my own
I have no place to call my home

You don’t get me, nor I you
You don’t know the pain you put me through
Endlessly tearing at my heart
If you had to stop, then why’d you start?

You make no sense, you never will
You want all to live, although you kill
You’re a terrible person, so evil and grim
You laugh, tearing me apart limb by limb

(Chorus)

It’s hard to breath and hard to see
Please let go, you’re smothering me
I’m all alone, in my own little world
The colors mix, as they swirl

One more time, I’ll try to escape
I see you now, at me, you gape
I can’t get out, but I can’t stay in
I can’t lose. I have to win


It’s all over, now it’s done
I can’t believe, it was you that won
He let me die. He killed me off
Down on my knees, I bled and coughed

(Chorus)

I’m all through now, thanks to you
I’m six feet under, now I have a home, too [comments] => 2 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sublimination [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
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Contributed by sublimination on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 01:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Home


Here I am, a bit confused
I’m feeling lost, and feeling used
Broken down and hated, unloved and all
I don’t know how to make you stall

Let me go, you spineless fool
You treat me like nothing, as if I were your tool
Love is rough, and painful, too
And you know I say this because of you

You don’t know how it feels to hate
How it feels to bleed as you wait
To hate it all, so strong and unreal
You don’t know what it’s like to feel

(Chorus)
You have no clue, no clue at all
You don’t try to catch me, as I fall
You let me go, I’m on my own
I have no place to call my home

You don’t get me, nor I you
You don’t know the pain you put me through
Endlessly tearing at my heart
If you had to stop, then why’d you start?

You make no sense, you never will
You want all to live, although you kill
You’re a terrible person, so evil and grim
You laugh, tearing me apart limb by limb

(Chorus)

It’s hard to breath and hard to see
Please let go, you’re smothering me
I’m all alone, in my own little world
The colors mix, as they swirl

One more time, I’ll try to escape
I see you now, at me, you gape
I can’t get out, but I can’t stay in
I can’t lose. I have to win


It’s all over, now it’s done
I can’t believe, it was you that won
He let me die. He killed me off
Down on my knees, I bled and coughed

(Chorus)

I’m all through now, thanks to you
I’m six feet under, now I have a home, too




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Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Kassidi on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 04:36:50 AM AEST
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This song is very good. It sounds like it is based upon something/someone. Wonderful write.
Kassidi


Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:33:04 PM AEST
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good stuff




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