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Array ( [sid] => 101337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming [time] => 2005-07-16 05:51:00 [hometext] => song lyrics, for my best friend who passed away a few months ago [bodytext] => So here i am, awake once more
Surrounded by memories of you
ive been lying here for hours
no idea what i should do

Smiling seems to have gotton hard
And Ive forgotten how to breathe
Enough pain to smother a million souls
Why did you have to leave

chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame

i want to say i never meant,
all the awful things i said,
and to see you in my dreams,
is the best relief i get.

i'm dying slowly without you,
i can't do this on my own,
i don't know how i've managed,
to survive this long alone

chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame

You're with me when im sleeping
I wonder if thats a sign
And although i wake up screaming
I'll keep dreaming until you're mine.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 39 [informant] => bohemian_With_A_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Dreaming

Contributed by bohemian_With_A_pen on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:51:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

So here i am, awake once more
Surrounded by memories of you
ive been lying here for hours
no idea what i should do

Smiling seems to have gotton hard
And Ive forgotten how to breathe
Enough pain to smother a million souls
Why did you have to leave

chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame

i want to say i never meant,
all the awful things i said,
and to see you in my dreams,
is the best relief i get.

i'm dying slowly without you,
i can't do this on my own,
i don't know how i've managed,
to survive this long alone

chorus:
and my heart dies a million deaths,
every time i hear your name,
so still i lie here wishing,
and drowning in the shame

You're with me when im sleeping
I wonder if thats a sign
And although i wake up screaming
I'll keep dreaming until you're mine..

Copyright © bohemian_With_A_pen ... [ 2005-07-16 05:51:00]
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Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:09:47 AM AEST
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Very sad but very well said. I'm so sorry for your loss. I jus lost a friend not long ago.
Luv, prayers, strength,
emy

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:02:35 AM AEST
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Touching write indeed.

Very heart-breaking and I can very much relate to your feelings of sorrow.

Beautiful write though, all the best to you.
May your friend Rest In Peace.

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by zenaprincess on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:14:31 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful write...
Zena

Re: Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:47:07 AM AEST
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Wow... Great poem. Death to the young is such a terrible thing. To say I'm sorry is not enough, but it's all I have.
Take care.
David

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